Reviews for nighttime in the city
cloudy rains chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
I fell in love with your writing style. x] Each words left me with these feeling, almost like a felt a piece of the character. Quite amazing x]
underlings chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
I absolutely adored the writing style! There was really good flow throughout the entire piece, and I liked the little snapshots of Rose and Scorpius that you showed. You have excellent prose and I loved the italicised parts because all of those phrases were quite poignant and really added to the lovely continuity of the fic.
sapphiqueandangelfire chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
r u ok?

u sound depressed.

i luv this story. it fits this pairing. but this implies suicidal thoughts or stuff of the sorts.

if you applied this sort of style and feeling to a twilight fanfic, it could be nebulis (if that's even a word, if not it could be) hardcore we-tried-to-love-each-other-like-we-used-to-but-we-just-couldn't. that would be amazing.

Ur an awesome writer.
eukaryote chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
You turned my eyes into waterfalls.

It was short and lovely and beautiful in an angsty way.

You're an amazing writer, thought I should mention that. :)
Easterchocolate chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
wow. really really good. nice and jaunty - in a good way. a rollercoaster ride, up and down. very original style, havnt read anything quite like it. very interesting ideas :)