Reviews for Bitten
musicalgirl4474 chapter 1 . 7/30
Lukewarm. Oh somehow that is SO very Sherlock.
NotQuiteAFangirl chapter 1 . 12/23/2014
One of the best whump fanfics I've read in a long time. Good rhythm, great use of flashbacks and memories, and a lovely ending. Good job!
Nessa chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
Wow, awesome story :D I loved everything about it, well done!
LDLFF chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
I like it!
Starlight05 chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
Aww the flashback about Mycroft and skiing was so sweet! And I really liked this, all of it. :)
shadowfireflame chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
“An interesting memory, he could have sworn he had deleted it.”

Ah, so sad. I get all the feels from this line because he thought he’d deleted this moment of brotherly love but his subconscious clearly didn’t want it deleted. So clearly it was special and important to some part of him, at least.

And how I love the scene of Sherlock being shot and John and Lestrade and Sally trying to keep him awake until help comes. Especially that line “I loathe skiing,” showing how Sherlock’s blending the two situations through the cold.

Lovely story! Thank you for sharing it with us!
The Pearl Maiden chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
Just went skiing for the fist time last weekend. Sherlock's right. FREEZING. Anyway, a great piece. Well-done. :)
Obsessive Freak chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Naww that was awesome. loved it! :D
sami1010220 chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
wow, that was fantastic. i really like the idea behind the fic, and your writing was simple but poignant.
Not the Doctor chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
I've come back to this story again. I absolutely love it. It's very Sherlock-toned and is actually quite realistic :D
I really liked the childhood flashback. It was not too long and not too short, just right so that the reader can focus on present-day.

p.s. Have to say "lukewarm" made me laugh a bit too much, though. Hahaha
Hekateras chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
I really enjoyed this. The stream-of-consciousness narrative was very effective - I enjoyed his memories of skiing, it seems like something he'd do - and, let's face it, this has pretty much everything I could want in a Sherlock whumpage fic. Of which there is far too little of, by the way. If you ever feel like writing more stories with the general outline of "Sherlock gets in trouble and it's up to John and the Yarders to rescue him"... well, do it. :)
Zacha chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
I am new to fan-fic and have read your story. The characters ring true. Consider doing a longer version of a similar story. Loved it. Zacha
MarriedUnderCherryTrees33 chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
Love this story! Incredibly well done. Just outstanding. Thank you so so much for this!
princessangelwings chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
excellent love whump! any more? xxx
Whisper chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
This is probably the best Sherlock Whump I've read by far!:D loved all the stuff about skiing, and the "you'll catch you death" part(((: please continue?;)))
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