Reviews for The Serpents' Child |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I was expecting a family friendly story but I liked it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dang! I’m usually pretty accepting of unfinished stories knowing that I can just imagine the ending for myself. But wow, this one is so good, I really wish there was more. Potential readers should read it anyway. Especially if you’re a fan of tearing down misogynistic double standards. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooooooo! Just noooooooo! I can't believe this is an abandoned fic! I needed to know what happens. I have no idea what the spoiler meant and I'm completely invested. Has the finished fic been posted elsewhere? Anyway, thanks so much for sharing this much already. I hope that it was finished somewhere. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an awesome story up until the Mammy elf part. Mammy is a racist term that really isn't ok to use. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bella had a mother moment. The pictures gave her some understanding into Hermione's muggle life. And telling Roddy that she did not want to lose her again proved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lucius has found Hermione! Now, NOW, once she is in Hogwarts, the games to remove Dumbledore CAN BEGIN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbledore, your name is going to be mud when Bella and Roddy get out! They will not rest until they find Hermione! Add in the Malfoy's and YOU are the one heading for Azkabahn! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seeing Bella being a mother is very nice. But, I smell trouble for anyone who harms her child! |
![]() ![]() How do you sleep with a snake wrapped around you?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bella is many things, but mess with her daughter, and you will face an irate momma wolf! A momma wolf out for payback! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg their namesNarcissa, Lucius, Bellatrix and Rodolphus) in anagram THAT IS GENIUS Author you have my respect I LOVED IT IS JUST A GENIUS WORK |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore this story! I'm sad you haven't updated in years |
![]() ![]() wait what |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah I hope you continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() I sincerely hope that one day you will be able to continue the story! You have captivated my attention the entire time I've been reading this story! |