Reviews for The Serpents' Child |
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![]() ![]() ![]() As a non sexual person, that just makes me laugh... Every time I see them desperate for something that doesn't have any intellectual value |
![]() ![]() ![]() I imagine, that it was even hard for her to say no. She surprised herself when she said it. Hahaha |
![]() ![]() On nice cliff hanger but plz finish |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do you even know how walz works? It goes in three. Never would it be counted "5, 6, 7, 8". If it goes in four, it's not waltz. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh darn...they switch and then there is no more lol I want to know how this works out |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is giving me anxiety like I deadass had an anxiety attack |
![]() ![]() Are you ever going to continue this? I have read it 5 times now and I keep hoping you will. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is Blaise no more than a Black male? Who dances? Stereotypes are harmful even if you are joking. And the Mammy elf being based off of a Black woman who was degraded in her “job”? Yeah it’s a no from me |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such an interesting story! I really enjoyed it. I know you haven't updated in ages, but I'm going to follow it just in case. Thanks for writing & sharing it with us. :) |
![]() ![]() Stop. Writing. Stories. Where. You. Change. Hermione's. Personality. She'd fight tooth and nail, she'd run, she'd do anything but sit there and attempt to be civil. Character development means you develop them over time, all of them, not completely changing how'd they react right from the start. She would not 'groan' at the word mudblood, she'd punch him in the face and hex him. That would be believable. And when she found out her parents were tortured, she'd immediately lose her mind. How can you still call her clever and strong and amazing if she's not fighting back? |
![]() ![]() Thanks for apologies |
![]() ![]() Great fanfics! Can you continue it,please? |
![]() ![]() Awwww it was so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why are you using a capital letter for Voldemort? He isn't God. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...i'm a lost of words, like.. what the–.. why did–.. *sigh* what the hell did i just read?, i just.. dammit, i thought this was–.. i'm looking for some Dark!Hermione fanfics, and that brought me here.. but what i read so far was about some girl who confused and had have her dilemma because about everything that happened to her, that turns out she's lonely, craving for affection, contemplating which is right and which is easy, not to mentioned horny as f*#ck!, now, i like OoC Hermione.. as much as the other guy but this is just not for me man.. not this version, its not for my liking.. my taste lay elsewhere, i love the plot tho, tbh.. Hermione turns out to be Bellatrix daughter and all and have that submissive/masochist side too even sometimes she is reluctant, but this is just not for me... thanks, for making me read until this chapter, but no thanks.. im out, |