Reviews for The Serpents' Child
W. L. O'Fallon chapter 29 . 6/17/2021
As a non sexual person, that just makes me laugh... Every time I see them desperate for something that doesn't have any intellectual value
W. L. O'Fallon chapter 24 . 6/17/2021
I imagine, that it was even hard for her to say no. She surprised herself when she said it. Hahaha
Guest chapter 47 . 1/26/2021
On nice cliff hanger but plz finish
Lilyenia chapter 20 . 12/28/2020
Do you even know how walz works? It goes in three. Never would it be counted "5, 6, 7, 8". If it goes in four, it's not waltz.
W. L. O'Fallon chapter 47 . 11/29/2020
Oh darn...they switch and then there is no more lol I want to know how this works out
Legaciesfan27 chapter 33 . 8/11/2020
This story is giving me anxiety like I deadass had an anxiety attack
Misplaced Samle chapter 47 . 8/7/2020
Are you ever going to continue this? I have read it 5 times now and I keep hoping you will.
OliveTheNerd chapter 1 . 7/28/2020
Is Blaise no more than a Black male? Who dances? Stereotypes are harmful even if you are joking. And the Mammy elf being based off of a Black woman who was degraded in her “job”? Yeah it’s a no from me
vancabreuniter chapter 47 . 7/28/2020
This is such an interesting story! I really enjoyed it. I know you haven't updated in ages, but I'm going to follow it just in case. Thanks for writing & sharing it with us. :)
Guest chapter 18 . 6/4/2020
Stop. Writing. Stories. Where. You. Change. Hermione's. Personality. She'd fight tooth and nail, she'd run, she'd do anything but sit there and attempt to be civil. Character development means you develop them over time, all of them, not completely changing how'd they react right from the start. She would not 'groan' at the word mudblood, she'd punch him in the face and hex him. That would be believable. And when she found out her parents were tortured, she'd immediately lose her mind. How can you still call her clever and strong and amazing if she's not fighting back?
Guest chapter 21 . 5/21/2020
Thanks for apologies
Avery940315 chapter 47 . 4/10/2020
Great fanfics!
Can you continue it,please?
bitchgirl chapter 2 . 4/8/2020
Awwww it was so cute!
cshen.julienne chapter 19 . 3/25/2020
Why are you using a capital letter for Voldemort? He isn't God.
Rice with Chest-Nuts chapter 45 . 3/21/2020
...i'm a lost of words,
like.. what the–.. why did–.. *sigh* what the hell did i just read?, i just.. dammit, i thought this was–.. i'm looking for some Dark!Hermione fanfics, and that brought me here.. but what i read so far was about some girl who confused and had have her dilemma because about everything that happened to her, that turns out she's lonely, craving for affection, contemplating which is right and which is easy, not to mentioned horny as f*#ck!, now, i like OoC Hermione.. as much as the other guy but this is just not for me man.. not this version, its not for my liking.. my taste lay elsewhere,

i love the plot tho, tbh.. Hermione turns out to be Bellatrix daughter and all and have that submissive/masochist side too even sometimes she is reluctant, but this is just not for me... thanks, for making me read until this chapter, but no thanks.. im out,
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