Reviews for The Serpents' Child |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know. I also have an issue with how OOC Hermione is. She goes from "loving" Blaise to oral sex with Dolohov to sharing her sexual encounter with Voldemort. But I'm not sure if that's just because it will all come to light later about why hermione is acting the way she is, so I don't want to judge too harshly. Also, isn't it disgusting the way the Lestranges are trying to pawn Hermione off to Voldemort? Bellatrix is yet again, choosing Him over Hermione, and not just her, but Rodolophus as well? Also, the story became a bit confusing half way through. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Is there a sequel? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That actually wasn’t bad. Liked it actually. Would definitely read the continuation if there is a continuation. 8/10 |
![]() ![]() Keep going, please! It has been three years :( |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I don't really mind but dosent Voldemort refer to Snape as Severus? |
![]() ![]() Please update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello... do you plan on doing a second one? I love this story and keep rereading it hoping that you've continued... please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved what I've read...It's just a shame that you haven't written more of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was amazing and was really interesting and i loved her interactions with the death eaters...im sorry to say but my interest dropped when you said she was going to be with Blaise...its...i have no want for them to be together...thats one ship or whatever i dont like or understnad...i would have loved to see her with someone older or a more common character..majorly dissapointed that i have to leave this story but i cringe when you say thwyell be togethwr...i honestly feel that voldemort and hermione interaction could have led to omething interesting and diffetent and that really spoke to me and made me so excited...really dissapinted but good luck all in all |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I know it has been a while since you updated, but I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading this story. I originally skipped the chapter where you gave the hint, but after running out of chapters I went back. Horcrux? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg! Please please please update this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG you have to continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() muffliato is the spell that causes buzzing in the caster's victim's ears. you cannot put a muffliato on a room. it Dumbledore had cast the muffliato Hermione surely would have said something about it. Dumbledore actually placed the silencing charm silencio on the room. so that when Hermione left the room she wouldn't hear what was going on. this is easy she is a horcrux. |