Reviews for The Serpents' Child |
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![]() ![]() ![]() muffliato is the spell that causes buzzing in the caster's victim's ears. you cannot put a muffliato on a room. it Dumbledore had cast the muffliato Hermione surely would have said something about it. Dumbledore actually placed the silencing charm silencio on the room. so that when Hermione left the room she wouldn't hear what was going on. this is easy she is a horcrux. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of my favourite story's. Please do update sometime. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i found this story on the favorites list of someone, and so far i enjoy it greatly. and seriously, fuck reviewers trying to tell you how to write your story, if they want a different story, they can read a different one, or write one their damned selves. |
![]() ![]() Wow! This is super good. Is Ginny going to spend the whole year as Hermione? Great story! Thanks for posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am still confused about Nagini XD I liked reading this story. It was interesting to follow along. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an awesome story and I really hope you finish the series eventually I would love to see where the story goes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story so far and this chapter is lovely. There is one thing I must point out though, which is you have Daphne and Astoria mixed up. Daphne is the same age as Draco and Astoria is the one who is two years younger than him and her sister. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you choose to update this series I'm curious on what will happen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Astoria is the younger greengrass sister and Daphne was in the same year as Draco, Hermione and everyone else |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I do hope you continue the story! It's so wonderfully written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soo now ginny, the girl who fell in love with tom, now has to go undercover as the person whom Voldemort want... seems like a great idea. Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved your rant. Go for it. Good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mammy Elf - what the hell? I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt and assume that you've seen Gone With the Wind one too many times. But Hermione is certainly no Scarlett O'Hara. Your story would gain a lot if it lost that ugliness in a future edit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() daaaaaaamn! ive read all 47 chapters and it was just getting good! please update soon! |