Reviews for The Serpents' Child |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow that's very interesting ! I hope you will continue soon ! Fingers crossed ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Epic She is SO SMart. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() As a law student I'm going to suspend the belief of this legal system and just smile and wave. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh very nice although the writing needed some improvement. Otherwise I am hooked on this idea. A clever ploy would be that no one recognizes her for who she really is. Growing up does change how we look after all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very interesting start and I am intrigued despite the high OOC'ness of the characters but then again the books only showed us crazy Bella. Far too much time was spent rambling on about Rodolphus's appearance, be careful there. Would it not have made more sense for her to have been given a different birth name and then insist later in the story that they call her Hermione? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will this story be finished or has it been abandoned? |
![]() ![]() You left the story in the best part :( , I hope it will soon update or start part two. the history is very good |
![]() ![]() ![]() tat was jus amazing pls ccontinue the plots r sooo good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story, you should continue it. Xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, so I know its been a minute on this story and based on your comments the other reviewers have been pretty much terrible to you, but I really hope you continue this story, I've very much enjoyed it thus far and would love to read on more. Also, to he people complaining that you made hermione a slut or out of character, realistically the addition of trauma and her logic would see her pursue less than ideal actions for emotional stabilization and stress relief. |
![]() ![]() Love the story hoping to see her and Voldemort have a lusty night |
![]() ![]() Love it and hope to see some dark romance between Herm/Vold |
![]() ![]() Why do I get the feeling He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named is interested in Hermione, as in he fancies her |
![]() ![]() Flat nosed face Oh gods that had me laughing my head off! |