Reviews for Doing Someting Different
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 6/10/2016
nice job
yeather chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
It was alright for your first lemon. A few grammar mistakes here and there but nothing major. And you should use italics when the characters are thinking to themselves so it's easier to read and understand. But good job. I liked the pairing too, hanataro doesn't get enough love :)