Reviews for Naruto of the Future
Ace Trainer Jessie chapter 3 . 3/17
i know it's been a long time. But would you consider updating it ?
Son Of Fellblood chapter 1 . 1/23
Dude, I'll be painfully honest. I stopped reading after : 'Loads Of Icy Senbon". It was from this sentence I knew this wouldn't be a very good fic. First of all; Icy implies that the Senbon were covered in ice, rather than made of it. Second, "Loads" just doesn't sound right in this context. Barrage would be far better. I know I am being nitpicky and you'll probably never see this review as you posted this fic 5 years ago. If you do see this, I recommend doing a rewrite, as this idea has much potential.
HyperA1985 chapter 3 . 10/28/2016
I am looking forward to chapter 4 and I hope Naruto challenges Leela to a match.
pensuka chapter 3 . 1/31/2013
hehe i bet bender didnt see that coming
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
more chapters
otherrealmwriter chapter 3 . 7/23/2012
The story idea is cute, but as I said before you really need a beta reader. :(
otherrealmwriter chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
I have to say you need a beta reader here. I see a lot of capitalization errors and each speaker needs their own paragraph in dialouge.
icecatfire chapter 3 . 3/25/2012
update faster this is awesome! :D
CaptureGod-Otamegane chapter 3 . 1/31/2012
Waffle192 chapter 2 . 1/27/2012
nice story. gots potential. thou they could be longer.
TerrorPain chapter 2 . 1/25/2012
Good story so far
frytrix chapter 2 . 1/25/2012
The plot sems good so far, altough i wish you would make the chapters longer.