|Reviews for Kitsune 1 Prankster|
| TheXWolf chapter 2 . 9/13
I have read this story several times and I still enjoy it good job
| TheXWolf chapter 1 . 8/19
i have to say payback are a bitch! :)
| TheXWolf chapter 38 . 7/27
i have a request can u update this more its a very googd story and is very intresting to read i like it alot so please update it asap thanks
| small mistake chapter 26 . 6/9
Goku is the Four-Tailed Ape. Isobu is the Three-Tailed Turtle.
| redstonepowder chapter 3 . 5/29
The grammar is just confusing, didn't you atleast try to rewrite it?
| Suhas chapter 38 . 5/18
Its very interesting..
Many would have liked if you had finished it..
| Vibrolux61 chapter 19 . 1/8
Hi, I just read half of your story and realized I ought to write down some of my thoughts.
You've written several amusing scenes, the payback pranks are genius. Saving Hinata's mom was also a nice touch.
There are however, in my honest opinion, several problems with your story;1) the complete OP-ness of Naruto ( though I often enjoy such stories) 2) the cliché civilian council, which again can be interesting if used correctly. Letting them get away with all their criminal acts, especially when the hokage has realized that they don't have any real power, is just stupid. I understand that you want them to antagonize Naruto, but after a while it get's boring and unrealistic.3) the TERRIBLE spelling and grammatical mistakes; these really take the fun out of the story for me! Since I'm not a native speaker, grave errors on spelling make a story especially hard to read. E.g. "Hedge" instead of "henge". You often use the Past Perfect (havePast participle) withouth the "have"part, again, making the sentence hard to read.4) a small annoyance; using Sandaime to adress the Hokage doesn't really make sense :S
I don't mean this review as a bash; I like several aspects of your story- but in my opinion you desperately need a Beta.
Thanks for writing,
| Mystical-Elf-Of-Sorrow chapter 38 . 12/25/2014
| JesterDGrowlithe chapter 2 . 10/29/2014
ending of the sentences are too final and that makes reading the story difficult
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
umm, what's the point of the seal if Kyubi can take over him whenever the hell it wants? and really, a jutsu to make him an adult
| Kain129 chapter 38 . 9/19/2014
keep it coming
| armahgeddon chapter 15 . 8/6/2014
there are several reocurring mistakes which drive me bonkers (mostly spelling) for example it is HENGE and not HEDGE when someone changes his appearance. a hedge is something completely different.
| Velmet chapter 38 . 7/30/2014
Wait, so Itachi and Kisame are with Akatsuki?
| kitsune clan head chapter 38 . 7/28/2014
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IT CAN'T JUST END THERE THAT'S SOOOOO CRUEL TO US READERS PLEASE YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS INCREDIBLE STORY I NEED MORE TO READ.
| cherryblossm chapter 38 . 7/28/2014
I love it and can not wait for the next chapter to be posted, I hope the wait is not as long as this last one I thought that it would never get up dated