Reviews for Kitsune 1 Prankster
ninjamonthu chapter 38 . 10/15
I hope you are okay. Although I doubt you will see this, I hope you update soon
currahee506 chapter 38 . 10/12
update please
loretta537 chapter 38 . 1/14
this is a great story, i hope you can update it sometime soon. i will admit i have some problems with the spelling and grammer, but the plot is great and i love the detail
duckie288 chapter 38 . 10/5/2015
god i love this story, i hope it continues cause its so funny
RimTheSilverWolf chapter 2 . 9/13/2015
I have read this story several times and I still enjoy it good job
RimTheSilverWolf chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
i have to say payback are a bitch! :)
RimTheSilverWolf chapter 38 . 7/27/2015
i have a request can u update this more its a very googd story and is very intresting to read i like it alot so please update it asap thanks
small mistake chapter 26 . 6/9/2015
Goku is the Four-Tailed Ape. Isobu is the Three-Tailed Turtle.
redstonepowder chapter 3 . 5/29/2015
The grammar is just confusing, didn't you atleast try to rewrite it?
Suhas chapter 38 . 5/18/2015
Its very interesting..
Many would have liked if you had finished it..
Vibrolux61 chapter 19 . 1/8/2015
Hi, I just read half of your story and realized I ought to write down some of my thoughts.
You've written several amusing scenes, the payback pranks are genius. Saving Hinata's mom was also a nice touch.
There are however, in my honest opinion, several problems with your story;1) the complete OP-ness of Naruto ( though I often enjoy such stories) 2) the cliché civilian council, which again can be interesting if used correctly. Letting them get away with all their criminal acts, especially when the hokage has realized that they don't have any real power, is just stupid. I understand that you want them to antagonize Naruto, but after a while it get's boring and unrealistic.3) the TERRIBLE spelling and grammatical mistakes; these really take the fun out of the story for me! Since I'm not a native speaker, grave errors on spelling make a story especially hard to read. E.g. "Hedge" instead of "henge". You often use the Past Perfect (havePast participle) withouth the "have"part, again, making the sentence hard to read.4) a small annoyance; using Sandaime to adress the Hokage doesn't really make sense :S
I don't mean this review as a bash; I like several aspects of your story- but in my opinion you desperately need a Beta.
Thanks for writing,
Mystical-Elf-Of-Sorrow chapter 38 . 12/25/2014
JesterDGrowlithe chapter 2 . 10/29/2014
ending of the sentences are too final and that makes reading the story difficult
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
umm, what's the point of the seal if Kyubi can take over him whenever the hell it wants? and really, a jutsu to make him an adult
Kain129 chapter 38 . 9/19/2014
keep it coming
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