Reviews for Elemental Master Naruto
armegedonknight chapter 8 . 9/23/2016
Well I got to Chapter 8 before I had to stop. The grammar killed it for me. Run on sentences give me a migraine and the amount of plot holes in this story makes swiss cheese look whole. You built your story in an adequate fashion but failed to spell check or iron out logic faults. A good indication was that fact that "level" is replaced with "lv" in the starting chapters. (Laziness) Do not recommend to people with above high school reading levels. (Its gonna be tough to get through)
jmendoza7173214 chapter 1 . 7/5/2016
Pleas start it up again
progamer740 chapter 17 . 5/29/2016
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nlaci55 chapter 26 . 2/16/2016
This story is soo good. I hope one day you will continue it.
The Storm Master 567 chapter 1 . 1/16/2016
Hey, since you abandoned this can I possibly take a hold of it? If not I understand it's just a really good story and I would hate to see it just abandoned at such a cliffhanger like this. P.M me if you want or not. Have a good day.
qwertypous chapter 26 . 12/12/2015
why! the story is really getting good! why abandon it?!
squidneko chapter 23 . 11/16/2015
if you write a xover please sign it as xover so people would know it
squidneko chapter 24 . 11/16/2015
this story is fine but not good why coz so many typo bad grammer and dude please how come neji vs naruto neji already lost when fighting hinata please fix your story ...
StoneTheLoner chapter 5 . 10/31/2015
Blah blah blah. This story wastes so much time, goes over stuff everybody who had watched Naruto knows already, and forced situations galore. Why did you even bother with the wave arc? I find myself skipping large parts of this, because I already know it...
StoneTheLoner chapter 4 . 10/31/2015
This entire story is just so convenient. He disappears with no reason given. Jiji's spirit moves on just before he is fully teleported, he just happens to land near team seven during their first real mission, he just happens to not have his weapon, he just happens to sleep only long enough for some nosy bastards to nose around in his stuff, thus given Kakashi the needed clues... STOP FORCING YOUR STORY!
StoneTheLoner chapter 2 . 10/31/2015
Please don't drag Negi into the Naruto world as well. He had his own story, so let Naruto have his as well.
Train Heartnett chapter 26 . 10/17/2015
Awesome !
I hope you update soon !
killer4853 chapter 26 . 9/24/2015
like
draco7347 chapter 26 . 8/26/2015
love this story so please bring it back for more chapters
Alphaandomega1997Hardcore chapter 20 . 8/23/2015
Pick medaka
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