|Reviews for Little Flower|
| fanatla chapter 21 . 9/10/2017
| kanakoyuki chapter 20 . 9/10/2017
It has its own happy ending despite the ending the way it was
| Guest chapter 20 . 4/19/2017
That was the saddest story I ever read, but it was a good story.
| Emi kei Usagi chapter 18 . 8/3/2016
Misaki killed himself in his own house back when usagi san was staying with them bcz of the trip and the preparations for the wedding...
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 20 . 7/19/2016
This is so deep.
Too much feelings...
Insecurity and all...
I want to know what Usami think after all that because if I'm Misaki, I could not even accept it because I was the one who break my brother and his ex-husband happy relationship because I love the ex husband from the start.
if it seen as stranger's view, Misaki could be seen as bad character who unfairly get happy ending because he break someone's happy relationship because his 'selfishness' and end up with one of them.
But since we see it from Misaki's view, we know it wasn't his Intention.
It's hurt so much...!
well written though...
few drop of tears escape from my eyes.
| Wyntermitchell chapter 20 . 6/10/2016
That story was one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. I cried my eyes out through most of it because, you really captured the detail in what people who have depression are truly feeling. In most of what misaki was feeling I felt myself, it was spot on and amazing. You should definitely write a second one, because I'm sure it will be just as good or greater than this one.
| animatronic 2.9 chapter 20 . 3/20/2016
Bull shit end I wanted him to die :O
| Unaviajante chapter 20 . 1/22/2016
Gracias por todo tu esfuerzo en este fic, fue muy intenso, descriptivo, drámatico y muy real . Disfruté mucho leyendolo, y termino de una bena manera ya que no tuvo un final de fantasía muy milagroso, eso me gusto
| Unaviajante chapter 3 . 1/22/2016
Wow estoy leyendome este fic de corrido, y es muy genial, me da mucha pena Misaki, la trama es muy buena
| Phxren chapter 20 . 7/26/2015
OH MY GOD, it was truly amazing! I loved every bit of it and I do want to read that second story. My god, you're amazing.
| Ninaloveanime chapter 20 . 4/3/2015
I hope you'd write the second book, I really like this story though I do question some part. like the one misaki attempt suicide in his bathroom and got electric shook, and the part where usami just suddenly 'okay' with misaki crying on him, after that call with taka.. or maybe that can be explain in the second book?
| Tooru Heer chapter 20 . 3/31/2015
Well after a long time waiting.
I say bravo.
Congratulations on compelting your story !
I do hope for a sequeal
hope you remember me cause I'd been waiting to damn long xD
| BlackRosedAlice chapter 20 . 3/4/2015
Finished your story and I have to say, the emotions, the drama, the detail that went into misaki's thoughts were remarkable and admittedly realistic in a warped way. If you're willing to take advice, and I don't do this normally, I have one major problem with your fic and that's the medicine in it. Because running ELECTRICITY through a patient just out of a WET BATH is never a good idea. And people don't slit their wrist in a bath just to leave it out in the open. Defeats the purpose. Because how on earth did Misaki get his hands on the pills anyway? And you need to eat a hell of alot of eszopiclone before you go into a coma. I don't know any hospital in the world who will sedate a patient just because they have suicidal ideation, unless they are out of control (i.e. pulling out cannulas and causing a ruckus) and even then, it's pretty last resort (because really, putting a patient on more sedatives right after he's out of a coma is not a good idea.). I do understand that it's probably not a major plot point, but I think it can be better with some extra attention to detail.
My honest recommendation would be to get a beta. You've got amazing talent at drawing the emotions, feelings and setting the tone of the story (which is the important thing), but another beta can help you set the scene better. Ground your story and give perspective. Little Flower was a very internally focused story, which is great in moderate doses; but I felt could've been better with more background. i.e. How he was interacting at school. How he dealing with the cutting in a realistic manner. This might just be a personal preference, but more outsider-watching-into-Misaki's-life moments would've have lent a depth to the story.
Having said all that, I really liked the story, and I'm genuinely not trying to flame you. Only reason I wrote so much is because I liked it, and I look fowards to reading the sequel!
| BlackRosedAlice chapter 1 . 3/4/2015
I don't know HOW I've missed this story but better late than never! It's so good so far!
I read it and I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I really really liked that sudden shift you had from first person to third person. It lent the whole thing a perspective that was sudden and interesting and I loved it (shockingly enough). The plot is interesting and I'm so keen on finding out what happens next. On to the next chapter! But I wanted to let you know how interesting this first chapter was.
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/15/2015
Omg plzzzz do a second book i have been reading this book from the start and i love it! It nearly killed me when you stopped writing for a few months