|Reviews for Have you ever wondered?|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
It was good, but i don't think you captured there personalities correctly or the character
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Nooooooo...it doesn't suck :D i love your story :3333
| Scarlet Moons chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
It didn't suck. I thought it was good. I liked how you used the word ain't in your dialogue. I say it all the time, but my little sister is always like: "Ain't's not a word." My comeback is: "Is too. Look it up. It's called slang."
Anyways, I saw some minor grammar issues, but it was pretty good. I'm not even good with grammar so it doesn't faze me. Like my teacher always says: "If I could spell, I could rule the world."
I don't think there were any spelling issues. I only wish it was longer. Not bad for your first fic.
| Rin Shwarz-Feuer chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
It didn't suck it was actually really nice and sweet. You should write more like this :)
| crystalfox127 chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
So cute! It didn't suck! It was utterly adorable!
| Taeryfai chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Short but sweet, the only thing which could make it better would be for it to be slightly longer so we can have more ItaDei :D
| shu chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
it's soooo cute! liked it very much!