Reviews for Just breathe
Guest chapter 17 . 8/17
Update. Please
Calmzone1 chapter 17 . 2/21
Interesting story. I have read other WBWL stories, but yours is different. I hope you do continue it one day. There are a few incorrect words and synonyms and homonyms used that could use some editing. Watch out for quiet/quite, threw/through and a few others. Just remember, even if people say you make errors, that doesn't mean you can't write. It just means you need a bit more work with grammar, punctuation and spelling. And also remember that when writing conversations, the other person's response becomes a new paragraph, not a sentence within the other's words. You actually are quite a strong writer. Although you are writing in the HP world, the majority of the words are your own. Thanks for sharing.
awefanfic chapter 17 . 12/3/2016
keziayansen chapter 17 . 7/25/2016
When r u going to update this story?
emthereble chapter 17 . 6/19/2016
Love it but are you ever going to finish it?
Draco chapter 17 . 4/23/2016
So Thrilling I just couldn't stop reading, I do hope that you write more for this sometime soon.
clo78 chapter 17 . 2/19/2016
love this
AriaChan29 chapter 17 . 2/7/2016
I know this story is like 4 years been or something but please UPDATEEE!
angeleyes1984 chapter 17 . 11/15/2015
has this story been abandoned
animal lover13 chapter 17 . 10/16/2015
I love what you have written so far. I hope you're able to update soon.

Keep writing
Mirage chapter 17 . 8/12/2015
aww cute Tom is soooooo sweet, but he should never Show this to his followers they would start to trow themseld at his feet in adoration
but why not so he could get many many new follower and more women that like to work for him
hey he could chang the tides they become light and Dumble dark with a kid and carring attitude like this

please really come back soon
its 2015
Mirage chapter 16 . 8/12/2015
yes...such a good guy James is, and the Little Kids too and that Matthew is not so spoiled that he is mean, but a nice kid
Dumbles is sick guy to go in the rooms of children and scare them, and wants them to do what he sick can he be...
Mirage chapter 14 . 8/12/2015
aww noooo the sick bastard got poor lucius...i so hope he has a Memory safety charm or so that he cant be ovlivated or that he got the findings out with a patronus so voldi gets them and can save him
Mirage chapter 13 . 8/12/2015
i love this Voldi so unsure...and how he found out that he has not enough female followers
but will he be only a father or Lover in the future?
and when not maybe one of the two wolves?

and how will you kill Dumbles..slow and painfull or fast and extrem painfull
and what of stupid lilly, do you want to kill her too?

and how will Bella be, i mean she was only the first time in the prisson and only shortly so she only should be a bit crazy but normal, will she love and smoother him or be indifferent to him and go out of his way and let Nagini do the rising of Little Harry?

please come back one day and write more chapters, its 2015
Mirage chapter 11 . 8/12/2015
wow Lily is a crazy easy to manipulate bitch...
poor James i really do hope he gets away from this two grazy fools when they try to do something stupid to him...
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