|Reviews for Allen's Mask|
| nekogirl017 chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
Is hugging it an option? THIS IS GENIUS!
| Snipperita chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
I like it! :'I totally didn't make me sad. Yep... totally.0_0"
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
totally loved it, its a lil sad but good poem
| Rin asa uchiha chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
that sounds like one of my friends! nice poem
| Marinne Karneval chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
loveee it :3
| Silvereyedfreak chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Beautiful exactly how I feel sometimes. Poor Allen. *glomps him*
| AllenxEdward chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Amazing! It's so awesome, 'cause it's true! Love the rhyme scheme and everything. Defiantly a great story!
| patrick the almighty observer chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
i suddenly have the urge to hug Allen...a lot. this is a great poem.
| ThorongilAnime chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
(sorry, I just couldn't be bothered to sign in)
Hm, it doesn't have a poem-y feel to it, if you get what I mean.
It would be better if you didn't try to rhyme the poem, and perhaps make the style a little more consistent, as the poem's lines seem somewhat mismatched.
E.g, they are all written in a different style.
Oh, and it should be 'And the tears that I cry', not 'And tears the that I cry'.
Anyways, you'll get better as you get along writing poems, I know I did.
For a first timer, your poem is quite good.
| ArrancarRayflo chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
Very deep write more (my sisters account)
| KingRabbit chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
That was sad but worke oddly well... _ thanks for writing.
| sera-the-otaku chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
OMG totally awesome and sad...but totalt awesome I love this!