Reviews for Allen's Mask
FayeTheBitch chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
Is hugging it an option? THIS IS GENIUS!
Snipperita chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
I like it! :'I totally didn't make me sad. Yep... totally.0_0"
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
totally loved it, its a lil sad but good poem
Rin asa uchiha chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
that sounds like one of my friends! nice poem
Marinne Karneval chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
loveee it :3
Silvereyedfreak chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Beautiful exactly how I feel sometimes. Poor Allen. *glomps him*
AllenxEdward chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Amazing! It's so awesome, 'cause it's true! Love the rhyme scheme and everything. Defiantly a great story!
Patrick the observer chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
i suddenly have the urge to hug Allen...a lot. this is a great poem.
ThorongilAnime chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
(sorry, I just couldn't be bothered to sign in)

Hm, it doesn't have a poem-y feel to it, if you get what I mean.

It would be better if you didn't try to rhyme the poem, and perhaps make the style a little more consistent, as the poem's lines seem somewhat mismatched.

E.g, they are all written in a different style.

Oh, and it should be 'And the tears that I cry', not 'And tears the that I cry'.

Anyways, you'll get better as you get along writing poems, I know I did.

For a first timer, your poem is quite good.

ArrancarRayflo chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
Very deep write more (my sisters account)
KingRabbit chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
That was sad but worke oddly well... _ thanks for writing.
sera-the-otaku chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
OMG totally awesome and sad...but totalt awesome I love this!