Reviews for Change is Good Right?
marquis.shax chapter 18 . 3/22
should've showed up in the Forest to confront the snake pedo you made Itachi show up a little to late in your story to make much of a difference aside from training
marquis.shax chapter 13 . 3/21
bah you played this to much like canon. Seriously it's stupid what's the point of giving Sasuke the curse seal when he's changed so much now he's no longer out to kill Itachi. You really should've chosen this point in time to bring Itachi back to either kill the Snake Pedo or at the very least scare him off. Yet it seems you've got no intentions of bringing Itachi into play anytime soon maybe not at all since you screwed up a bit with the wave arc as well. In the fight with Haku you acted as if Sasuke JUST awoke his Sharingan yet he already had it when he got pissed off and went to confront the council about what they forced Itachi into (you also didn't make any mention of Danzo being there). Seriously what's the point of changing Sasukes character only to have him become Orochimarus butt slut all over again
marquis.shax chapter 11 . 3/21
hmm no mention of Snake Pedos favorite boy toy and his little offer of "help" with his ninja info cards and also you don't point out the amount of times you're allowed to be caught cheating so it sounds like you get caught once you're done (might wanna edit that if that's not what you intended)
marquis.shax chapter 10 . 3/21
it was a good chapter an I'm not really complaining BUT I do believe Hiruzen would've probably told Naruto about Kurama after what happened on the bridge especially when it's a danger to not only himself but to the entire village that Naruto doesn't know what's going on now that he's felt and used that power
marquis.shax chapter 5 . 3/21
you know in the graduation exam screwed up a little bit. In the graduation you completely skipped over probably the most important of the "academy 3" which is the substitution jutsu you just completely skipped it having them do henge and clone when the Substitution is actually the one basic jutsu that will save your life more than anything else.
marquis.shax chapter 2 . 3/21
for some reason I just don't like it when Hiashi goes after Hinata like that just over Naruto since in Canon he wasn't disrespectful of Naruto like that (although I do believe he didn't think highly of him as he didn't know of Naruto's heritage and thought he wasn't good enough to associate with the Hyugas)
marquis.shax chapter 1 . 3/21
lmao "Panther" is clearly the style you'll be having Shika use. Also I'd have to say that while "Dragon" sounds alright I'd have had him take bits an pieces of each style (even though it's done in a few other fics) and create his own unique style that works for him rather than sticking to one style since when sticking to any single style someone can actually counter your style with a different style but if you mix up various styles it's to unpredictable to easily be countered
Roxie.88 chapter 21 . 2/28
Wonder what the hokage is going to do now
Illuviar chapter 21 . 2/18
Awesome story! Please update soon!
cherrypie chapter 12 . 2/10
once u pop ur v-card u can feel secks anytime...telepathically, of course.
logic chapter 6 . 2/10
if she ain't totally restrained, she can always bite her tongue off and die in a matter of minutes. ppl been doin dat since 5000 B.C.
Sgtvp chapter 21 . 2/1
Things are starting to heat up!
Solvdrage chapter 21 . 1/31
Kokone is back. Wonder when she would show back up. Good update.
Dragon Man 180 chapter 21 . 1/31
I hope that with Kokone's information Konoha can catch Orochimaru off guard during the invasion. Naruto's counter to Jiraiya's idea of how he should spend his evenings was good. Hopefully Naruto will have the Rasengan done for the finals, it would really wow everyone.
Naruto secret jutsu chapter 21 . 1/31
I feel Kokone can be trusted as she hates Orochimaru, and her running from his lair would make her quite intelligent and at least high genin level, nice chapter :)
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