|Reviews for And Then Another Day Began|
| B3TAVIDAL chapter 15 . 1/22
I read the previous installments of this story but only now I catched up with "And Then Another Day Began" and ITS AMAZING! I love the writing, very true to the show and how the J/R relationship has grown. I see it hasnt been updated for a few months but I would LOVE to read this story all through.
Overall, great job Lara Cox! I hope you come back with more :)
| Matthew1985 chapter 15 . 12/30/2013
Very good! Can't wait for next chapter.
| Antoine chapter 15 . 11/13/2013
Hi, there. My name is Antoine. Here's my summary.
I'm a fan of Jack/Renee and was so angry that they unnecessarily killed off Renee, but I noticed her death was very strange to me, since a friend of mine is a doctor in a ER. He said that they would normally worked on a gunshot victim in a few more minutes, which was not seen in Renee since it was only a minute before she was pronounced dead. I'm also even more mad that she won't be on the 24 miniseries. So I probably won't be watching it.
Anyway, I think this story is interesting, but I am a bit concerned about the lack of action on Jack and Renee, other then working in the White House. They should get into action, like they normally should. Other than that, the story is good and the tension seems to at the limit to where 24 is at.
Continue with your story and think about what I said about Jack and Renee needing more action.
| MarsStone chapter 15 . 11/1/2013
So far, I think Hayworth is becoming more erratic due to the fact his wife and daughter we're killed in that bombing and seeks retaliation when evidence of the bombing point out to the Russians.
I think the interaction between Jack and Kim was nice. I think Jack sees that Renee is making a difference with his family. Something tells me that Jack will meet Mandy again after seeing her picture on the TV and recognized who she is.
It looks like Brendan is planning something in order to go after President Taylor in the hospital she's in and I'm afraid what that might be. All I can see is that he certainly blames the US Government for the death of his other son.
I certainly hope Chloe and the others can help find this mole Dexter without traumatizing his own son.
Anyway, you are making good progress. Keep it up.
| DieHardBrendan chapter 15 . 10/31/2013
Hmm...this looks intense so far.
I know that Hayworth is going to shrew up later on from the looks of the way he has been behaving.
Jack talking to Kim was definitely an emotional scene. I also can tell Jack was in shock when he found the true identity of that Secret Service agent and that she was actually Mandy.
Renee sure did learn a lot from Jack about trust and betrayal after hearing from Nate's replacement that he was involved with a co-worker and understanding Bradshaw's betrayal of his partner.
Brendan sure has a vendetta against the U.S. Government over his other son's death and Mandy isn't too happy about continuing on at the mission since Brendan threatened her to continue with the assignment.
I hope to see more of this story soon.
| Sergei chapter 14 . 10/16/2013
Please forgive my poor English writing. I will now want to say is the story is good. I was a fan of Renee and was mad that she got taken out. I hope she survives in this story and Jack will need to be alive with her too.
| Lifeisnotawishgrantingfactory chapter 14 . 9/30/2013
Amazing, well done. ;) look forward to the next chapter ;)
| Greg chapter 14 . 9/29/2013
Keep up with your story. I'm enjoying it. I hope Jack and Renee survive this day.
| MarsStone chapter 14 . 9/29/2013
From the looks of the events of the bomb attack, I say everyone will have their hands full now that President Taylor is in the hospital with injuries due to the bombing and several high-ranking officials dead.
I think Jack leaving the hospital when an attack occurred while sicken by someone who poisoned him is something Jack would do.
Renee has survived several brutal moments today and she will have a long day ahead of her from the looks of all the events that occurred in that story. Hopefully, Jack and Renee will survive together.
Renee removing Nathan was rough thing to do, since Ethan wanted him remove due to his failure to prevent the attack.
It's a safe bet that Vice-President Hayworth is compromised by the death of his wife and older daughter and he might do something wrong later on.
I think it would wise not to underestimate Brendan since he is probably going to beat that Russian mob to the job and not letting Mandy leave.
Continue with your story.
| DieHardBrendan chapter 14 . 9/28/2013
Wow...this is getting intense.
So far, the situation is escalating further. At least Jack and Renee are alive. Leo will probably escape from the hospital now he heard of what happened.
Something tells me that Hayworth might shrew up as Acting President since his wife and oldest daughter are dead.
Looks like Brendan and Mandy will be at each other's throats over the situation now that they have a competition to deal with the Jacobi mob family.
Keep on posting this story.
| Lifeisnotawishgrantingfactory chapter 13 . 7/27/2013
I love it as usual, well done ;)
| MarsStone chapter 13 . 7/26/2013
So far, I like how this story is heading. Sorry it took me so long to review. One part of criticism, is that I don't like the change of dialogue since they are without the quotation marks. It really got me confused to where the dialogue is. I think you should changed the dialogue and have it quotation marks.
But other than that, I love the reconciliation scene with Jack and Renee. You can tell Renee is saddened by the news of Leo planning to propose to Liz and that she lost her wedding ring. Renee just couldn't live without Jack. Renee was
Nathan knows something's off with the FBI after the death of that guy in interrogation and I can tell Renee doesn't really trust any agent in the FBI after meeting Jack as well as Tony Almeida and Dana Walsh, but they don't know who Mandy really is.
Mandy, Brendan and the others are getting ready to hit the Capitol to try and kill the President.
I got a feeling about who may have poisoned Jack and who was Brendan talking too, but I won't reveal it.
I hope to see more of that story soon.
| DieHardBrendan chapter 13 . 7/12/2013
So far, things are looking better and intense. This chapter is pretty good.
Jack and Renee's reconciliation scene was nice.
Nathan knows that something's off on the death of Ross and there is a strong possibility that there is a FBI mole inside there,
Something tells me that Brendan knows who Brooke's true identity is and I think I know who is it, but I won't reveal it at this time. And it looks like Brendan, Mandy and others are in the final stages of their operation.
Anyway, I hope to see more soon.
| Lifeisnotawishgrantingfactory chapter 12 . 5/12/2013
It's amazing, well done, and i liked the leo and renee phone call very much, ;)))
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2013