Reviews for dan vs my little pony friendship is magic part 1
man chapter 1 . 4/4
Lots of errors in this storie with grammer
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4
You did really stupid thing just making one chapter for each storie.
pyrotigre chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
please break it up! just a bit of advice, make paragraphs instead of a wall because leaving it like that will discourage readers.
randomgirl chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
Paragraph breaks are your friends.
Haley the rainbow taco chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Dan hates adventure time! I hate him SO MUCH! *raises fists in the air* !
M C chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
C: Well my favorite part is when they turned the car pink. M: A little girl would have loved it. C: But he wasn't a little girl. M: While makes for humour. C: It's humor. M: HUMOUR! C: HUMOR! M: HUMOUR! C: HUMOR! M: HUMOUR! HUMOUR! HUMOUR! HUMOUR! HUMOUR TIMES A BILLION STARS! C: FINE! It's humour then. M: I win! C: *face palms*