|Reviews for The Master of Death|
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/10
this does not do Harrys age and experience justice. he is foolish and not at all a likable character. fair too weak for his supposed age and experiences xd
| NaniteSystems chapter 11 . 2/20
A great story, with so much potential. Great writing!
| Ic3pup543 chapter 11 . 8/6/2021
Alright, I gotta give it to you, that's a motherfucker of a way to end that chapter. And technically this story too, huh? Talk about a cliffhanger.
Anyway, can I just say I'm a huge fan of your story? I just sat down and binged it this afternoon, and it was quite the read. I truly thought I'd found all the exceptional archives on this site years ago, but my pessimism has proven unwarranted again.
I love the dresden files for any number of reasons, and of course our dear lad harry potter here. I dont see many fics of the two bc there just aren't that many dresden files fics. I completely approve though, as you no doubt know.
I love the Barmy Dumbledore act harry pulls, the witty facade Overtop clinical caution above a deep sense of desire, of a need to help. Pretty good stuff! And dropping potter into what could've happened to dresden were he not a total rulebreaker, what an idea!
I also want to appreciate all the symbolism and exquisite detail you throw into these images. For a moment, darkness. Then, light? Oh, and the fight against the fiendfyre? The arming of an enslaved people? Priceless.
I also have to say I love your portrayals of magic and the world's here, and this matter of fact everyday business of the afterlife is pretty great too. I think you have an elegantly crafted motherfucker right here.
I don't know what you're up to these days, if you are at all. I dont know if you'll ever see this. But if you do, hello. Hope life's been getting better, stranger. I've no intent to agonize and hurry you to write more of this beautiful story, though I would surely love to do so. Instead, let me say that if anything were to be written, it would surely be a fine thing, and one I would be glad to behold. I hope you've kept writing beyond here since you left.
Stay well, stranger.
| Li-Ion78 chapter 3 . 7/12/2021
Mmm this is good. Inteoducing the world and also pretty vivid
| Li-Ion78 chapter 1 . 7/12/2021
Not the true form of angels Be Not Afraid harry said
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/23/2021
This is the dumbest fic i have ever had the displeasure of trying to read. 100 year old Harry, and he is still a naive little boy. Thank god this fic is dead.
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/23/2021
You made Harry into a wimp little child. If he just killed justin and the vampires from the start none of this would of happened, But you had to have Harry play the white knight ' i dont kill' character. It is lazy and boring to read.
| SentinalSlice chapter 11 . 4/13/2021
This story was epic! It’s a shame it’s abandoned or dead.
| Mastersgtjames chapter 5 . 4/8/2021
would be nice if the author made more stories like this. Outsider!Harry, MoD!Harry, Godlike!Harry. Have him ride his train into DC, Marvel, BtVS...
| Lady Logos chapter 11 . 1/9/2021
Good story so far. I don't know that much about Dresden Files so it's nice to come to a story where Harry doesn't either. I love the whole premise. well done!
| Spriggan chapter 11 . 10/25/2020
I just stumbled across this gem. I love the writing style, very clever. I think my favorite part was the train ride between realities.
| zelva713 chapter 3 . 7/11/2020
Oh rather like Bob the scull
| WaleXdraK chapter 1 . 5/21/2020
If anyone is interested to read more of this story then go to where the author wrote more of it under the name Ryuugi, he sadly didn’t finish it but some of the chapters are from mid 2018 and it’s possible he will one day go back to it.
| StonerMcWeedPot chapter 1 . 3/8/2020
Ah man, I thought Harry would get a younger body. This is really well written but i feel like it’s just going to be a wannabe OP Dumbledore in the Dresden Files universe story.
| FuryJoe chapter 11 . 3/4/2020