nice fic

Hope you finish this one day it is really good

Great story, I hope you countine.

"Ah, I see," Harry said, nodding. "So basically, we exited time, drove backwards for a bit, crossed the street, and then reentered?"

"Of course not, sir; it just means nothing out there exists. I think you'll find that there are a great number of things that don't exist, sir; indeed, we didn't exist a short time ago."

These 2 quotes all by themselves have earned this story a place on my 'Most Excellent Story' file.

Finished reading all the chapters up so far. I loved Outsider!Harry, he's amazing. I can't wait to see just what sort of time-travel shenanigans he has/is going to get into. I hope you don't get discouraged and keep this fic going. :)

A for creative use of splinching.

Slightly disappointed with this. I mean I never read the Dresden Files but I was at least hoping for a really OP Harry especially after reading the other reviews for this. Normally a character with your Harry's personality actually has the power to back up his attitude.

I'm going to be honest here... For a master of death, Harry is pathetically under powered... For a 100 year old wizard, Harry is pretty sad... For an outsider, Harry isnt very impresive either... In all honesty I thibk I have missed some of your reasoning for this... Maybe I'm just overly attatched to Harry kicking ass. Anyways, good writing style, keep up the good work! My "critisism" of content is pretty much purely a personal thing, so dont let it stop you doing your thing.

went realy shit don't read

Love it! Hope you start updating again.

Loved this story

kinda like how harry is being portrayed in this story

Amazing. Sad its dead though. And yes, its even dead on SpaceBattles.

This was a lot of fun. Was looking forward to Harry closing the time loop eventually, but what is here is inventive and a pleasure to read.

Not gonna lie; these two chapters are my favorite of all. They just are so amusing, and they aren't convoluted with a bunch of crazy plot. Nice job.