Reviews for The Master of Death
Rangle chapter 2 . 1/20
Too much inner monologues and outsider is not supposed to be this weak in Dresden verse.
Tornhold chapter 5 . 11/18/2017
I have no idea if you are still around, or even looking at these... But so far the temporal humor is amazing.

"This is probably exactly what I am going to do to myself."
PrettyInPink1515 chapter 9 . 10/31/2017
I like your writing but why is Harry so weak?! Not only that,but, I don't understand the plot of this story.? It's basically, Harry being summoned, gets his ahanded to him, a long speech, he saves whoever he's trying to save and then repeat.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/6/2017
went shit
TL14 chapter 11 . 9/16/2017
Great story! I hope too see you become inspired again one day and continue this story no matter how unlikely it is!
leetheresearcher chapter 11 . 7/30/2017
nice fic
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 11 . 7/1/2017
Hope you finish this one day it is really good
Guest chapter 11 . 6/27/2017
Great story, I hope you countine.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2017
"Ah, I see," Harry said, nodding. "So basically, we exited time, drove backwards for a bit, crossed the street, and then reentered?"

"Of course not, sir; it just means nothing out there exists. I think you'll find that there are a great number of things that don't exist, sir; indeed, we didn't exist a short time ago."

These 2 quotes all by themselves have earned this story a place on my 'Most Excellent Story' file.
ValykirieRevolution chapter 11 . 2/28/2017
Finished reading all the chapters up so far. I loved Outsider!Harry, he's amazing. I can't wait to see just what sort of time-travel shenanigans he has/is going to get into. I hope you don't get discouraged and keep this fic going. :)
reason vs. rhyme chapter 4 . 1/20/2017
A for creative use of splinching.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2016
Slightly disappointed with this. I mean I never read the Dresden Files but I was at least hoping for a really OP Harry especially after reading the other reviews for this. Normally a character with your Harry's personality actually has the power to back up his attitude.
Cute Basilisk chapter 5 . 12/23/2016
I'm going to be honest here... For a master of death, Harry is pathetically under powered... For a 100 year old wizard, Harry is pretty sad... For an outsider, Harry isnt very impresive either... In all honesty I thibk I have missed some of your reasoning for this... Maybe I'm just overly attatched to Harry kicking ass. Anyways, good writing style, keep up the good work! My "critisism" of content is pretty much purely a personal thing, so dont let it stop you doing your thing.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/15/2016
went realy shit don't read
cellester chapter 11 . 12/4/2016
Love it! Hope you start updating again.
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