Reviews for The Master of Death
capctr chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Very nice
Zauber chapter 10 . 7/1/2013
Wow, this is phenomenal! You've clearly put a lot of thought into the plot, what with the whole time-travel thing, which is impressive in itself; but it's also really well written. Can't wait for the next chapter!
MrRobertsIII chapter 10 . 6/30/2013
Weird but fun! You seem to have melded about three different fics into one. While I enjoy reading this, it can be hard to follow.
kffs chapter 10 . 6/27/2013
Despite knowing nothing about Dresden Files, I am thoroughly enjoying this story.

Keep it up - I'm looking forward to more!
Great job with characterization and awesome plot points
RatherFabulous chapter 10 . 6/22/2013
Well, I'm a bit confused about half the time, but ...
Coooool...one wonders how far the bouillabaisse zone will extend...
charm13insomnia chapter 10 . 6/21/2013
looking forwards to what will happen next
JohnD chapter 7 . 6/20/2013
Hey, I don't now if you'll read this by i know Hebrew and the closest word to "Auror" i can think of is "aur" which means light..

I really like your story so far please keep writing..
Kroz Phantomville chapter 10 . 6/19/2013
Superb chapter. Loved the ending.
jdboss1 chapter 10 . 6/19/2013
this could of being Much better but ever word harry potter said WAS WTF

he look and camoe over to COOL in till he talks
Guest chapter 5 . 6/19/2013
I expected Harry to turn his fiendfire into more maneuverable or more agile animals rather than that impressive zoo display. The only noteworthy aspect of crocodiles I can think of involves either camouflage or their jaws. I don't think strength matters much when you're fire and the camouflage doesn't seem likely because they're fire.
sirnerdlord chapter 10 . 6/16/2013
thank you for updating! i love this story and always look forward to the next chapter!
Lord Tangerine chapter 10 . 6/16/2013
So I set the world on fiiiireeee...
Cricycle chapter 10 . 6/16/2013
Ahhh, I was rereading this because I had stopped somewhere around chapter 4 or so, and it is so good. Ahh, but to return and be met with a cliffhanger. Ah well.
Parzival vi Britannia chapter 10 . 6/16/2013
This is crazy good
omegarulesall chapter 10 . 6/16/2013
epic, just epic. Master of death sets the sea aflame. How would dresden take this?
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