| Reviews for The Master of Death |
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   Grizzmon chapter 9 . 1/17/2014 Experiments, horrible experiments. |
| Grizzmon chapter 8 . 1/17/2014 I guess this is how he angered Titania... |
| Grizzmon chapter 7 . 1/17/2014 Now that was fun. |
| Grizzmon chapter 6 . 1/17/2014 Let's me guess, the secret ingredient is humans? |
| Grizzmon chapter 5 . 1/17/2014 Again, blasted time travel! |
| Grizzmon chapter 4 . 1/17/2014 Time travel is confusing. |
| Grizzmon chapter 3 . 1/17/2014 Now that's British humour for you. |
| Grizzmon chapter 2 . 1/17/2014 Well, let's see if old Harry can free young Harry... |
| Grizzmon chapter 1 . 1/17/2014 Harry is not amused. |
| Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 11 . 1/17/2014 Fiendfyre... Good luck. |
| Fullmetal11791 chapter 11 . 1/13/2014 Huge fan of HP. Huge fan of the Dresden files. Huge fan of crossovers between the two. And I will say, this was a pretty cool story. That said, it has been somewhat confusing with the time travel and what Harry (Potter) is *actually* doing. *Why* answer the summons? *Why* did he have to take the form of an outsider? Hell, *why* hasn't he just told people he's really human and done something to prove it? Would have solved a bunch of problems with the Gatekeeper. The one thing I really haven't liked about this story so far is the idea of time paradox. I personally think the idea (assuming time travel was possible, which is never will be), is ridiculous. If you want to get into a debate why, I'd be more than willing to do so over the message service on the site. That aside, cool story, and looking forward to updates. |
| Why881992883840002882818839 chapter 11 . 1/7/2014 This is a lot of fun. Old Dumbledor-esque Harry is my favorite kind of Harry. Or, at least, was. I think old, dead, housed in an eldritch body from outside creation Dumbledor-esque Harry is my favorite now. Keep up the good work. |
| Jake chapter 11 . 12/29/2013 I love all of your stories, but please start updating again. I see by all the crappy frozen stories in your favorites that you are still on the site. You let your kid use your account ? |
| Allanasha ke kiri chapter 11 . 12/23/2013 ooooh! This is fascinating. I love what you're doing here. Absolutely love it, and I can't wait to see where you end up going with this. Allanasha |
| Benedictchua chapter 11 . 12/18/2013 Amazing story so far, plot seems complete and there aren't any distinct gaps in the storyline. Time jumps are a little confusing and there should have been a little more explanation on the link between Outsiders and dead people from another dimension, (as we know the dead from Dresden have their own little world) so maybe that could be something to work on. Also, a few grammar errors but I suppose that can't be avoided. All in all an excellent story. UPDATE SOON! :) |