|Reviews for After The Woods|
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/26/2013
Omg the story was so good please please please make a sequel!
| wormtail-was-a-whovian chapter 7 . 11/26/2012
This was great! I want a sequel, I don't know who wouldn't.
| The Great Yopp chapter 7 . 7/11/2012
Goodness...I love this story so much! This is one of the best Into the Woods fictions I've read! I hope you write the sequel...or maybe it's already written? I haven't looked yet. This was wonderful! And I love the name Hope Laurel. It is very beautiful. :)
| Hannah chapter 6 . 4/15/2012
"Where do babies come from?"
Ah, the eternal question that makes parents quake with fear.
| Hannah chapter 2 . 4/15/2012
He pulled it tight, too tight, underestimating how small her waist was.
Wouldn't it be OVERestimating?
| Zoe Alice Latimer chapter 7 . 3/20/2012
I did quite like this, although you couldn't pay me to give two teenagers with all their hormones permission to live together. If you do write a sequel, let me know.
| KatnissMellark12 chapter 7 . 3/18/2012
MAKE A SEQUAL PLEASE
| TheatreGeek98 chapter 6 . 3/6/2012
It's a little short. Also the red cloak is somewhere in the intestines of Milky White. but I love the baby's name.
| Zoe Alice Latimer chapter 6 . 3/5/2012
Not a very realistic birth scene. A premature baby without health problems particularly. But I thought the name Hope was appropriate.
| Zoe Alice Latimer chapter 5 . 2/27/2012
Yay, they got married! I kind of wonder where the village /came/ from, though. All the characters we met in the musical either died or ran off...
| Zoe Alice Latimer chapter 4 . 2/18/2012
Hm. I'm interested to see more of Jack's reaction.
| EverafterDemigodGallagherCahil chapter 4 . 2/17/2012
Love it! You should have Holly and Jack fall in love
| TheatreGeek98 chapter 3 . 2/13/2012
I wish you'd spent more time on their romance, but great job!
| Zoe Alice Latimer chapter 3 . 2/13/2012
I'm caught up!
So far I've enjoyed the story. I like how you address the characters. This chapter was off to a halting start, though. Ella and James's romance accelerated and really left me in the dust. I know you said six months passed, but I didn't get the sense of that from the rest... I'd like to suggest that you try to write another opening to chapter three that shows us more of how long it's been, the effects of what they've been doing. I hope that's helpful, but at any rate, I do hope you update soon. :)
| Noelle Brown chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
It's pretty good, although I think it can get a little bit too dramatic at certain points. It's good that you gave them all names, although Charisse doesn't seem to really fit the image that I had of his wife, though we all see them differently. Get Chapter 3 up soon.