|Reviews for Goodbye, Brother|
| Jo chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
Oh my gosh wow! I was tearing up at the end! I love your ending! I can totally imagine that that's what could have happened after the kite flying with Sohrab and Amir.
| Vrna chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
When I finally stopped crying after reading the original book, I thought that would be the last tear I shed for Amir and Hassan. Alas, I was wrong, because I wasn't even halfway through reading your story before I had to dab my moist eyes again... And again. Thank you for your beautiful ending.
| NoComparison chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
This was an incredible ending to the novel. Kite Runner is my favourite book, and I absolutely adore what you did to it. Personally, I felt it was left a bit vague at the end, but I really like how you closed it off.
Hassan coming to Amir in a dream was a nice touch. I like the way that Amir is able to admit the guilt he feels over the way he treated him. He wasn't allowed that in the original novel, and I like the fact you gave him the ability to do it here. Both Hassan and Amir were kept in character and I love how Hassan mentions how thankful he is that Amir is taking care of Sohrab.
This is a very well written, well developed oneshot. :) Great job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
this was very nice.
| Saphirabrightscale chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
I just finished reading the book and was so touched by this. Great job.
| IThoughtMYJokesWereBad chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Oh my goodness. This is amazing!
I felt the same way when I finished the book, like something was missing. But this really fills the hole that was left behind. You did a very nice job with Hassan and Amir. Hassan is my favourite character and I was beyond sad when he practically disappeared from the story. This would have been the perfect way to bring him back in in the end.
I just love this,
| Crystal Rose chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
This is absolutely amazing, brought tears to ma eyes :')... Wonderful!
| StrangeThingsDidHappenHere chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
OH MY GOODNESS! That was amazing :3