I really liked this fic and those little changes you made really made the story unique. I thought your last 2-3 chapters were a bit rushed. More time spent on detail wouldve enchanced the drama and made us care about losing Gale and the death of Snow. But overall well done.

Ese "amo" es una palabra que katniss usa deliberadamente demasiado

Haymitch's line to Katniss already has me hooked

Snow said siblings, so how is it Katniss is called? Doesn’t make sense.

Troppo bello!complimenti

Wow this was such a satisfying read. I really loved everything you did with the characters and how you changed the plot to fit that. Awesome job! Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful fic!

I do like the reveal here that Peeta mentioned to his prep team that he loved Katniss even before the games began and that it was real on his side. Caesar is so hilariously out of place in District 12.

I continue to be impressed at how, despite the different circumstances, you keep things so close to canon, complete with Gale being jealous and Peeta and Katniss both being unsure how much of their relationship is real. Gale's anger here was a nice touch; I've always thought K&P were kinda wimpy compared to him. I love Caesar, so I'm looking forward to seeing him again, too!

"They want to see fire" - haha, it sounds almost like Haymitch is talking about the Hunger Games fangirls here! Peeta comes off as very goody-goody to me in this chapter, even more so than he was in canon; the backstory with his scars was a bit much. I'm hoping that he develops more of an edge as they continue their showmance.

I like the new living arrangements that you've put them into here. I think Mrs. Everdeen and Prim could be a good influence on Haymitch, but we'll see. I also like how Katniss and Peeta's interaction feels pretty close to where they were at the beginning of the second book, and I love that group hug scene at Katniss's house after Peeta breaks the news. Curious to see how it plays out once they have to starting doing their showmance for the cameras.

What a number of interesting twists in this chapter. You do such a great job at summarizing what happened during Peeta's games (I love that he was the one protecting Rue) and establishing a shared history between him and Katniss (like the story about Prim's birthday cake) without ever making it feel like an info-dump. I love the final lines of Katniss realizing why she's now in danger.

This story looks like it's off to an interesting start. It changes the dynamics of the plot so much to not have Katniss go into the arena and to have Peeta and her be friends. I wonder whether their friendship can hold up without her being able to relate to what he's been through, and I really the dramatic ending created by Haymitch's line.

Such a good story. Thank you

Simply WOW

This was so so good! Thank you for writing!