I'm so sad this is over. I loved this story so much, I fell in love with it when I read the first chapter and I've been reading it non-stop for the past couple days.
I loved the ending of this chapter, how you made it foreshadow the first and I thought that was.
I plan on reading more of your works. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story. Every moment of it was perfect and I never tired of reading it. I thoroughly enjoyed this, and I'm sad that it came to an end but I'm sure there's plenty more of your work that I can still get to read.
Great job, and again, thank you.

I loved the the story wished there was an epilogue but other wise it was amazing :)

Loving this story! I'm scared but excited to see where it's headed. I love the way it's written, and the plot and everything is perfect. I look forward to continuing to read this story!

Amazing,

DAAAMNNN SNOW YOU FUCKING COCK BLOCKER! excuse my language. But, seriously a way to end a moment in heaven from the devil himself.

I cried from his proposal. Gahh why does he have to be so sweet and perfect? 'more than you know' *sigh* I just. broken down into sobs. Hopefully Katniss will finally admit her true feelings along with Peeta. They both underestimate the love they share. This is absolutely incredible, fallen head-over heels in love with this fic.

Loved how you wrote this! Nice twist on the story that we all know and love :)

In many ways better than cannon. Thanks for sharing.

It is beautiful. Not only well-written but it resonates some hidden lines in the original HG, like how Katniss said things that scare her mother to die and Gale's anger towards Capital. It makes a lot of sense that their fathers were actually rebellion leader. It's just like reading the real fic.

And I have to say Peeta's proposal is absolutely beautiful and touching.
Really enjoy reading this story. Thanks :)

Review for Capter 16.
I am reviewing all the chapters from 1 to 16 here.

I knew Rory was going to the Games too, I simply knew it!
OMG! I almost imagined Katniss walking to get to 12 but know I must say that I love you because Peeta and Kat are together again (I almost can hear Katniss saying "Don' call me Kat")

Probably one of the best retold stories I've read that actually sticks close to the characters while creating your own version. This was written well and came full circle!

Wow. I loved the whole thing. It was fantastic. There are too many things I'd like to comment on
*cough*fangirl about*cough* so I'll just say one:
I LOVE you for Effie's character development. I suppose that many people might find her shallow and air-headed, but I've always thought that Effie was a very intriguing character and there were always little things in the books that hinted at there being more to her than just the frilly escort. So I really really really love that you've delved deeper into Effie's character, even if there wasn't a lot about her. I've just always felt that people underestimate Effie and I want to thank you for helping her show her true colours.

Hey, me and my friend ruby are huggggee fans and we think some FICs should be made into movies THIS IS DEFINATELY ONE OF THEM! Congrats on another great fic...
-R

I really enjoyed this fic, how I wished Katniss and Peeta had formed a friendship prior to the games, that they had more time together. Thank god for fanfics and whatif scenarios! I really liked Katniss and how devoted she was to Peeta and of course the progression of their relationship from a farce to the real thing. Gale ugh I don't mind him, but I wish he would stay 50 feet away from Katniss with his romantic feelings because he messes with her head, but I guess that's unavoidable. I'm happy they got married and she was so determined to protect him, but I honestly dont think Peeta would have managed being a capitol whore and I totally get why he's got survivor's guilt Peeta wouldn't be who he if he came out unscathed from the horror he endured. It was crushing to discover Katniss and Prim would have to take part in the games and Peeta knew there was no way his wife would let her sister die it felt like they were doomed I'm glad Katniss got fed up of Snow's crap and spoke her mind at that interview. I'm so happy they have each other and I know its a little bordering on codependency, but after the amt of stuff they've been through they wouldn't have survived without each other. You did a fantastic job and I cannot wait to read more of your work!

Love this story! Thank you.