|Reviews for Battle Cries|
| Mo-Lou chapter 5 . 10/3/2012
Great dramatic beginning! LARKIN! BAH Jen and Larkin. I love the flash back to with Jen and her parents. GERARD MY BABY BOY HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO HIM :O. Don’t kill my boy off. Gosh darn it! I love the Gerard and Tunny bonding!
BAH Tunny calling her beautiful! LIBBY! I love Libby
HELL NO TUNNY YOU ARE NOT GOING IN THE FRONT LINE *Mo RUNS AND COVERS HIM. SLAPS IN THE FACE*
Oh EG you sneaky girl with the keys to the closet. Well she’s a little pushy but really…really it’s Tunny who wouldn't be! Clothes would be off as soon as I heard the door lock!
Well holy shit this just got less innocent! May I be EG in this scene…? No wait I’m Heather never
mind. But hot damn! YOU DON’T NEED TO BE SAFE WHEN YOU GOT THAT MAN!
Well holy shit that was some sexy time my twin.
Aww he made a little bed that’s so sweet! AH Southern love it
This Chapter was AMAZING! I know it was awkward to write but job well done! I love you
| atomickilljoy chapter 5 . 8/28/2012
FINALLY AN UPDATE!
| entwined-in-a-web chapter 5 . 8/27/2012
Did I just read...straight porn? And was I...turned on by it?
I'll let you know when I'm done reevaluating my sexuality XD
duuuuuuuuuuuuuude. come baaaaaaaack to meeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
| xWhatsernamex3 chapter 5 . 8/27/2012
Oh my god I missed this fic SO MUCH.
I seriously started crying when Gerard almost died again. And then when Tunny said he'd be going into battle.
so. many. feelings.
But jesus christmas I love this so much3 It was definitely worth the wait.
| atomickilljoy chapter 4 . 7/5/2012
Please! Write more! I read the story and absolutely loved it! Please continue!
| Mo-Lou chapter 4 . 4/9/2012
I giggled at the mention of Gallagher…and you think YOU have a problem HI.
Yeah she wants to leave HELLO Tunny! HAHA I’m like why is this first little bit familiar then I’m like OH yeah my twin let me sneak a peak! Of course he’d be right on time, what a man. So…can Tunny kiss me? “I pulled him closer, if that was possible” haha I’d be on him. Oooo Tunny you naughty boy :P. “But I guess breathing is important. Or whatever” Good one EG good one, yes it is well…unless you are with Tunny.
Duh she can’t get enough of him…look at him. He called her baby! I’m surprised Jen hasn't stayed to watch a little bit. Hahaha oh Tunny…I love him. Wow Jen does know Jones VERY well, and how could Jen not fall for the puppy dog look! HAHAHA her admitting why she came in NICE one! OMG Jen is cruel, how dare she poor EG.
A hidden door I like this place! HEHE Jimmy! OMFG Sadie Day eeeeep this is why I LOVE YOU. Awwww I started tearing up at the whole baby thing. Hehe “I’m still a bit of a gentleman” Oh Tun Tun. Aww Will and Johnny :D., HeHe sex in the mess hall would be wrong. Oh pinky swears they’re serious shit!
I actually screamed when she told him her name! OMG I love southern Tunny well southern boys in general!
I loved this story A 5 cuddles with Stark 5 with Scott and the flying scene in the show with both! THAT’s how much I loved it
| xWhatsernamex3 chapter 4 . 4/8/2012
HOLY DAMN THIS IS AMAZING.
Jen is such a troll :P
Oh god. Forever jealous of these nurses oh dear lord.
and oh my frhifdsjlkfdscxjklgmds SADIE. *HEARTS*
I squealed when Jimmy was talking about her. xP
UGH SO PERFECT.
| clw317 chapter 3 . 3/10/2012
I have nothing else to say but that this is awesome. Please update soon.
| xWhatsernamex3 chapter 3 . 3/6/2012
Oh holy shit I forgot how much I love this.
This is fucking great.
What I wouldn't give to be one of those nurses oh my god... *-*
| Mo-Lou chapter 3 . 3/6/2012
Hi! okay...here we go get ready (BTW listening to EG oh Stark)
BAH ESRDTYGUHIJGFDOKJFDASD AMAZING.
The dream was soo good, teaching her to play and he starts singing Extraordinary girl I giggled at that! "All ears or all yours?" HEHEEHE. Seriously I WISH he'd kiss me like that (well any guy really;)) HA right when it starts to get good (the dream) "up and at'em" hahahaha
I love that Jen calls her Jonesy. HAHA "You were blushing l like no tomorrow" I would be to if I had that dream then she blames it on the heat but Jen knows better :P.
CHASE! Haha I see that him bragging through not seeing the girls. HE I always smile and giggle at Sergeant Call just the name because I can picture it in my head.
Ha dream boy! Could Tunny come save me like that?
Then Jan and Andrews High five hehe like I said I so pictured that in my head.
Then she gets out of his arms :P. Ha yeah she probably should learn their names! I like how Declan added about how Chase almost knocked their food...good Dec heaven forbid something happened to the food. Then Chase apologizing :D!
Tunny nudging her and acting if nothing so she tires and he nearly chokes that was SO funny. Then Tunny you naughty naughty boy hahaha That whole bit was well written and well done. HA him winking made me giggle a lot.
Love that he's like fiance everyone gets excited Haha Chase i think his ego is showing :P...this boys a tad cocky. Meanwhile Tunny is still being silly how has she not jumped him yet? I love that Chase is going to go home this makes me happy (because what he's going to do. Then he hasn't even planned how he'll propose haha oh dear. I love that the girls are going to help him since these boys are a tad clueless...except Tunny of course;.
YAY ANNABELLE! Haha Andrew "Hey you're not getting ideas are you?" HAHAHAHA PLEASE DO Declan...oh wait we've planned it out. I like being in this and dating Declan and being Andrews little sister!
Nice Jen breaks her hair elastic, leaves, enter mr. I'm hot shit and a know it AKA Tunny! FOR THE LOVE OF GOD JUST MAKE OUT IN FRONT OF EVERYONE. I'm SOOOOOO excited for the next chapter this one was AMAZING
I'd like to give you 5 cuddle sessions 2 with Stark 2 with scoot and 1 with both!
| gimmeachancetofly chapter 3 . 3/6/2012
I SAY YES. I don't care how he proposes I say yes! :D
This is do great! I especially loved the dream in the beginning :) update soon!
| Mo-Lou chapter 2 . 1/30/2012
OMG I was giggly and blushing.
AH Theo!"You're pretty" ha oh Theo so much love!
Tunny and the pants and the shirt! I'd stare at him too. more like drool. I was laughing and blushing this was amazing
Then when he goes on about her shirt being on I'm like "YES!" Tunny for the Win. Then him wanting to know her name!
This story is going to be the death of me sooo fucking adorable. The parts about the tattoos!
| creativepurpleglitter chapter 2 . 1/30/2012
Yes, shirtless, sweaty Tunny does indeed deserve a review. :D This chapter was so awesome, just like the first one. The end with the murmur of "extraordinary" made me smile. (:
| xWhatsernamex3 chapter 2 . 1/30/2012
THIS IS AMAZING.
GAH. ME GUSTA.
| entwined-in-a-web chapter 2 . 1/30/2012
XDDD That awkward moment when I'm reading this with my girlfriend o.e
That's ok though XDD
GAAAAH! SEXY TUN-TUN! Yes. She has your legs raised so she can sex you up ;D
Best. Fandom. EVER.