|Reviews for At the Water's Edge|
| pandasforjesus chapter 12 . 1/25
ERMAHGERD! I LOVE THIS STORY!...but it would be awesome if you made the chapters longer. :D Ya feel?
| xXxDarkSongxXx chapter 12 . 1/24
It's been so long since I've read this story...I had to skim back to understand what was happening . I hope Utau doesn't get the tear -.- And Tadase, like always, what's power. Freaking blond. Can't he see that Amu and Ikuto are destine for one another.? Anyways I hope you update soon.!
| Rawritz chapter 12 . 1/23
Ok, YOU HAVE TO LISTEN TO THIS SONG. The moment I heard it I couldn't stop thinking about this story. Please, it would mean the world to me if you listened to it. Haha. It's 'Mermaid' by Train.
Your story is amazing btw, I can't wait to see what happens next :)
| Cinnominbubble9 chapter 12 . 1/22
XD AWESOME!(Like Prussia)(you wont get that... never mind...)(what if Ikuto and Prussia met... AWESOMENESS!1)(oops, sorry about that...)
| blu2012 chapter 12 . 1/20
Things are definitely moving along well. owo
Somehow, I thought Mirene was writing this story. -.-''
I don't know. I'm a little sleep-deprived.
Coolio. This chapter was good. -u-
| nekolover18 chapter 12 . 1/20
I was so happy when I saw that you updated this fic! I love mermaids and I think you're a genius for writing this! Till next time! :-)
| Ern Estine 13624 chapter 12 . 1/20
getting good can't wait for more
| Akuaneko413167 chapter 12 . 1/20
OMFG I'm so happy when I saw your update I screamed.I am sick to day and seeing that's u updated this made me feel better!
| Night-Azure chapter 3 . 1/7
Pitocchi and I love all your stories! Mermaids have fascinated us, among other things since elementary school and we love mystery and folklore. Naming the animals and giving them roles as animals fitting to the story was ingenius!
| Yume De KuroAkaKitsune chapter 11 . 11/13/2013
I love this story! Plus, I laughed a little when you put Mirene into your story. I hope I can read the next chapter soon! Good luck in updating your stories ;)
| Nightshade chapter 11 . 10/27/2013
Ah! When will you update?! It's getting intense!
| kitty.0 chapter 11 . 8/31/2013
Yaya already know Kairi well enough to call him "koi!" Yay!
I'm really glad that they finally got to meet up! Now, they can move faster in a more sure direction and we get to see more Amuto moments!
| kitty.0 chapter 10 . 8/31/2013
Amu's powers are so amazing! If they belonged to someone like Tadase (in this story) the whole world would be doomed. Also, I feel like what Nagi said at the end was the perfect way to sum up everything that's going on.
| semberthemushroom chapter 11 . 8/29/2013
God this is adorable .
I really like that you have some details about merpeople that actually make sense (as I stated in my other review) (the only thing that has vaguely bothered me is that Ikuto picked up a fish with her bare hands and considering his hobby he should know that doing that removes the protective slime on the fishes scales making it susceptible to harmful bacteria in the water, basically dooming the fish to get sick and die... I was like... WHY YOU NO USE TOWEL IKUTO T_T ) hehehe... but that's just me getting carried away with my passion for anything water related. Gomennasai .
The plot is pulling together rather well, I can't wait to see where this story goes! Humm... Sorry I don't have anything particularity constructive to say other than the bit about fish slime (which was mean to be helpful not bitchy), the truth is I don't really see any need for improvement! Keep up the good work! 3
| semberthemushroom chapter 8 . 8/29/2013
Thank you so much for pointing out that merpeople do live longer than humans, it's only natural since gravity makes things age and there is less gravity under water *so happy* I don't know why I refused to read this for so long :/ *will post an actual review when she gets to the latest chapter*