|Reviews for Bonkers R Us|
| disneylouis chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
wow i just read part one and i loved it
| Hatter and Hare Productions chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
That was just too cute with all the love and the understanding and feelings and... pardon me while I wipe something out of my eyes. The fact sergeant is warming up to Bonkers is great, considering all the grief he has given him. There are spelling and writing errors, but it was not a big deal. I just have one question, where did they vacation? Once again, great job.
The Marvelous March Hare
| TheDoctor388 chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
You write for Bonkers and Miranda so darn well! The relationship is just brilliant in my view and I can't wit to see how you develop it in future chapters. I love those two, they really are the perfect partnership. :)Oh, and Ilove the softer side you are showing to Grating. Much more sympathetic than he ever was on screen. :D
Also just a side note, but I think you overdo the italics a bit towards the end of this chapter. Have a look and you'll see what I mean... unless of course it is part of some great masterplan you have up your sleeve. ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the fantastic work.
| DisneySweetHeart chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Can't wait for the next part!