|Reviews for After the Beach|
| Molotov chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Hope. This is what your story gives me. Hope.
| Kina Kalamari chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
So I just barely finished watching the series a couple hours ago, and this was exactly the tonic that my wrung-out soul needed after that ending. Don't get me wrong, I'm a big fan of open, not-quite-happy endings, but sometimes you just need something to fill that void inside you that they leave.
This was perfect. Thank you. :)
| wilf21 chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
I'm pretty sure I must have read this before. But prompted by your latest "Slices of Life" I have re-read and very glad I did. It's so nice and so much more likely than Sarah just getting back or even wanting to get back all of her former memories. Well written too - now there's a bonus! I do miss this show.
| grandetiopaco chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Re-reading this lovely story. I've never really liked the "Mr. Walker" bit as it seem to diminish Chuck but I can appreciate how some people may find it endearing. Thanks.
| SabreenaLee chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Ok...tear drop. That was touching and sweet. Thanx for writting. I miss Charah so much...;(
| Nerdette-AllivarT chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Why did i haven't read this earlier on? One word "FANTASTIC".
| Rafiela chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Love love love the story! Sweet ending. :) but (sorry) I found it a little unbelievable (i dare say) that Ellie wasn't in the renewal of vows. Just sayin'! Keep it coming! :D
| s-david-m chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
A lovely post finale story, and pretty plausible overall. I do disagree with the timeline though. I don't think their first date and first kiss would have taken over 6 months, nor do I think it would even take Sarah that long to fall in love with him again. Very well written though.
| Tempe4Booth chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
this is really beautiful
| Hotski chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
God damn that was beautiful, I thought it took a bit long to be honest but oh my, it was so damn beautiful when they got back in a loving place again. What I loved the most was when she didn't want to be called Bartowski, well that was pretty sad but when she finalyl got called Bartowski again and Chuck finish the story by saying that he loved her too, Mrs. Bartowski.
Lovely that Sarah thought about how the house would fit kids aswell.
Awesome job like always.
| MusicalMania chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Cute story! :-D
| jinxed97 chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Wow, great story...definitely one of the best finishes to the season. Thank you for writing, look forward to more.
| Naiade chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
actually a few tears ran here. But this is so perfect and real I feel the shivers throughout each piece.
| Fire From Above chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
| malamoo chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Hey, just wanted to let you know that this is one of the first post-finale fics that i really enjoyed. Great job!