|Reviews for The Daddy Thing|
| Aileda chapter 12 . 7/28
I read this story like 3 times. I really love it, thankyou!
| Fias Xin chapter 7 . 5/9
as someone from the future, i just want to say that kawaki is a real good son to nawuto and boruto is a jerk plus momo eating popcorn and watch all shit happen
| Fias Xin chapter 5 . 5/9
wait does this mean naruto never met hinata or save her before go to the academy
| Ky111 chapter 12 . 11/30/2022
Great story, looking forward to getting stuck into the sequel.
| dorothy.nediak chapter 1 . 11/21/2022
I love this fan fiction. Absolutely adorable.
| camilaflordeloto chapter 12 . 8/9/2022
I loved it!
| TrenchcoatMan chapter 12 . 2/1/2022
This really was a fantastic little story. Just the right level of fluff. There were a few things you didn't do that I thought you might have and a few threads i wish you had covered that you didn't, but all in all it was a fantastic read. I'm quite excited to read the sequel, I do hope you haven't dropped it.
Well, we'll find out soon enough. Maybe we'll get to see Naruto forming some more bonds with kids his age. I'd love to see him and Sasuke getting on better with no massacre making Sasuke so angry all the time.
| Eleesar chapter 11 . 12/5/2021
A Beatitul story, thanks for the great reading time!
| Miizzllaneous chapter 12 . 12/3/2021
The alternate should've been how it happened YOOOO uihwaekjstnejasg
I love this by the way! A bit disappointed Sakura just disappears though, I was really waiting for their interaction to eventually come back up again. I hope it does in the sequel but I'm not too sure... Another thing was that although Naruto was quite ahead of his fellow students, he isn't exactly the strongest or very overpowered. I think that could've been used as a plot point to also drive some of his fellow students to improve, and he could definitely help out considering it would not be out of character. Not everyone I imagine would jump on that train or keep up but, it would've been a good challenge for, let's say... Shikamaru! It also would've served to humble Sasuke a bit, and people like Sakura could strive in intelligence more to improve what she does has.
Naruto could and would've been a perfect catalyst for improvement for his peers, especially since he does stick around and doesn't graduate early. I could've totally seen him having a major shift in important people, their growths and their relationships and dynamics in Naruto life. A lot bigger then the ones he did end up having. Though. the ones you did end up going with weren't bad at all, I enjoyed them just as much just felt a bit like something was missing. Alas this wasn't mean't to be a long saga so I understand. The fluff was soooo worth it as well!
The only real criticism I have for this would be how you dealt with Minato getting his body back. While I had issues with the technicalities and how it all actually went down, I do think the more important thing was Minatos return to the village. I highly doubt it would've taken Kakashi an entire month to meet Minato only for Minato to approach him first. The time line was iffy is what I'm trying to say, and how the village deals with it as well wasn't up to par with how it should've went down in universe. A lot of the politics I find fascinating though from how you write it, but in some of areas it's lacking. Then again it's not a main focus, the fluff is lol and Minato did end up shifting things either way in the end. Hmmm
Yeah that's pretty much it, just a bunch of knit picking lol. I hope I'm not being overbearing. xD It's not my intentions. Though the fluff was absolutely perfect!
| Urutiyori chapter 9 . 11/24/2021
| Silver3567 chapter 5 . 7/28/2021
| yochan123 chapter 4 . 6/21/2021
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2021
I teared up reading this
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/31/2021
This chapter just hurt... a lot
| Sec.ANo.1b chapter 1 . 2/28/2021
In terms of favouritism, it would not be any such thing, for a jinchuriki is and will always be an asset to any village claiming presidency over said Jinchuriki, and thus Sandaime would have been checking his asset. (Disguised as an asset, in reality is family)