|Reviews for The Daddy Thing|
| Cielo98Amante chapter 10 . 10h ago
THIS ISH SO FREAKING CUTE!
Really..Naruto is a bundle of cuteness walking on earth..
And I really LOVE the moments between the two of them..
Also I hope our yellow flash will have his body for ever
AND I really hope you write the sequel
To be honest I didn't even watch the anime XD (don't kill me)
But it is soooo long I tried watching it once but i stopped at the 25th episode i think?
BUT i know the main stories and a few facts from the manga so i understood probably everything from this fic
AnywayI'm glad this was the first fic I read about Narutos
Because it is soooo beautiful AND adorable..
So I'll be waiting for you
| Blaizekit chapter 10 . 3/12
I am interested in this, yes. oAo I'm really sleepy at the moment so pulling my thoughts together is a bit difficult, but... this is really good. It has really touched my heart. (: And as much as I love fluff, seeing how capable you are at heart-wrenching action makes me want a sequel all the more. I'll be keeping an eye out for the last chapter as well as the sequel when you post it. D
| Blaizekit chapter 9 . 3/12
What? No. No no. D:
| Blaizekit chapter 8 . 3/11
I like Naru's new nickname for him. It makes sense, they know each other under different circumstances. Just like with Kakashi and the others. :D
I'm excited about them traveling out side of the village. Should be fun times. Or- you know. Fun but potentially dangerous times. xD
| Blaizekit chapter 7 . 3/11
I love the part with Gai so much. Also, I am going to semi-repeat what I said before and say that the way you resolved the conflict between Minato and Naruto in this chapter was very refreshing. It was realistic and not dragged out unnecessarily purely for the sake of drama. It felt real. Thanks! Now on to the next chapter.
| Blaizekit chapter 6 . 3/11
...I didn't just get choked up a little, no, whatever could you mean? (I am such a sucker for the family fluff)
I admit I am just the slightest bit confused about Minato's 'external' form... is it transparent looking? Does it have legs or does it kind of fade out like a ghost? Would other people be able to see him or not? It said before he couldn't talk to anyone else, but does that mean literally no one else can hear him, or is it just the principle of the thing? (to keep it a secret and whatnot)
| Blaizekit chapter 5 . 3/11
I say- respond to what you feel like responding to. :D You're putting forth hard work to bring us this story, so the least we can do is review, whether answered or not
I enjoyed this chapter. I find it very refreshing that the Third is in the know and there isn't any unnecessary drama/complications from that. It always irritates me when there are stories like this and everyone is too suspicious and willing to throw someone in jail for the smallest things. They may be ninja, true, but in the canon most people give their comrades the benefit of the doubt and are more likely to be TOO trusting than vice versa.
| Blaizekit chapter 4 . 3/11
Interesting turn of events. It'll be fun to see where this goes.
| Blaizekit chapter 3 . 3/11
And so it begins. D Follow your dreams, Naru-chan!
I loved Kakashi in this, as well.
| Blaizekit chapter 2 . 3/11
Woww, this is very interesting! So far, I'm totally sucked in to the story.
| Awesomeness chapter 10 . 3/9
This is soooo good! Please update soon!
| Alec McDowell chapter 10 . 3/2
Oh yikes I didn't expect anything that happened here! I'm not quite sure what's going on with your timeline because Itachi is 'Madara's' apprentice, yes, but I didn't think he'd actually joined Akatsuki but the way Orochimaru talks of a failed first attempt implies he already did... And oh, Jiraiya! This is a huge change that he lost that arm so early. Even if he's still strong, other villages will see he's vulnerable and I don't doubt they'll send people after him if he is still traveling around. Great to see Minato get his body back here as well, can't wait to see the heart attacks and dance of glee on the Sandaime's part when they get back to Konoha
| ArmorOfGeddon chapter 10 . 2/19
You can definitely count on my vote for that sequel! This has been a fun ride, but it's time for Minato to start living up to his name and start making some real waves in the plot!
| The Once Caged Bird chapter 10 . 2/17
THIS STORY IS SO BEAUTIFUL I CAN'T EVEN BEGIN TO DESCRIBE MY FEELINGS FOR IT
That being said, I laud and praise you for your amazingly unique plot! It's been so much fun reading a story that's not the same old formula that so many authors know by rote. I mean, this last chapter especially was seriously full of surprises that had me backtracking and saying "wait, what?! did they just go there? omg they totally just went there!" It was quite a novel and fun experience XD
I'm so looking forward to where you take this story! , *adds to faves and alerts* Keep up the awesome work!
| greenmonochrome chapter 10 . 2/8
I love this! The fluffy parts are truly adorable, and the plot is getting more and more interesting!