Reviews for The Daddy Thing
NeverEndingStoryTeller chapter 11 . 4/9/2015
Type your review was seriously the cutest thing ever!

And I absolutely LOVE your characterisation of Minato and how believable Naruto's advanced development was.

Can't wait for the sequel!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2015
I really, really love this fic but portraying Naruto as brilliant or a prodigy kind of takes away most of his charm, no offense intended. Being the outcast who became a hero through hard work is Naruto's thing and influences like 99% of the canon plot. It's what makes him so appealing and his severe lack of any natural talents is one of the reasons why he can sympathize with people so easily. Being a genius is Sasuke's and Neji's is unique to their respective characters and actually suits their personalities in a way.

It's also why I don't read fics where Naruto is a prodigy, or where he is banished/neglected and ends up with a huge harem and an empire. It just screams Gary Stu, adding genius to his already long list of heroic qualities.

Not that canon Naruto is a Gary Stu. At the beginning of the series he was brash, childish, somewhat self-centered concerning his dream to be Hokage and not exactly protagonist material.
jupimako chapter 11 . 3/31/2015
Your story... It, it made me really really happy. Thank you. I enjoyed every second.
Lila Dunmare chapter 11 . 3/13/2015
That was very sweet ! I loved it n_n
Yvonne Park chapter 11 . 3/8/2015
I loved this story! You did a wonderful job with it! I really liked your Minato. It was great seeing the interactions between him and Naruto. So cute! Great story! :)

LW chapter 5 . 3/2/2015
This is... interesting. Will keep reading to see where it goes.
Sebine chapter 11 . 2/22/2015
That ending was down right fuckin' adorable.

Needs a sequel.
sparrowhawk13 chapter 11 . 2/13/2015
Love it! Please this can't be the end! chapter 11 . 2/11/2015
Simply lovely. Please give us more!
lambtastic chapter 11 . 2/7/2015
Oh My Gosh I love this333! All the Naru-chan and Minato fluff is so sweet:3 This is definitely my favourite naruto/minato father/son relationship fanfic:)
Turmanarmo chapter 11 . 2/2/2015
This was so heartwarming and awesome, I love the bond those two have and I enjoyed this greatly. I wish you luck on whatever you do next.
Unfortunately Unknown chapter 11 . 2/1/2015
I really ought to go through and leave a review for every chapter, that was so good. I don't normally see such a talented portrayal of Minato, or such an interesting and plausible change in Naruto's own personality. I admit to wanting a bit more Kushina, but I understand how she would be hard to work in.

I'm very impressed, too, at how this story, so long, is actually finished. Most authors don't manage to pull that off (I among them), but it's very enjoyable to read a solid ending - which is exactly what you have here.

Thank you for writing,
monkey kix ass chapter 11 . 1/22/2015
aw, totally loved how you ended this story. hope you get around to writing the sequel to this. really enjoyed reading your story. thank you for sharing your work.
creativesm75 chapter 11 . 1/19/2015
maipigen chapter 11 . 1/19/2015
loved it hesitated to read the last chapter as i wanted so much more hehe. please return, you are a talented writer
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