Reviews for The Daddy Thing
thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 8/27/2017
yea, i cant imagine sasuke adapting well to second place
thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 8/27/2017
It is interesting that you chose to keep naruto's thoughts a secret, only showing us his father's
thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 8/27/2017
so sarutobi knows whats up now, i wonder if/when kakashi will be told
thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 8/27/2017
naruto's one of those characters who makes other people lives better by his very presence, you do a good job of writing that
thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 8/27/2017
the interaction with kakashi is really well done, having him actually try to be a decent brother is one of my favorite AU's
thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 8/27/2017
its also good that your introducing some new problems as well, though canon alone would be enough to break most people were they in naruto's place
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 8/27/2017
nice twist, it should be cool to see how naruto turns out with that little loving voice whispering in his ear
Undeniably Uzumaki chapter 9 . 8/4/2017
So I feel this needs pointed out. Jiraiya is an S-Rank shinobi. More than that, he's a top tier S-Rank. Unless there were several hundred bandits, there is no way it took him ten minutes. Think about it, shinobi are regularly shown to run faster than cars. The problem here is your understanding of combat. Jiraiya isn't fighting someone of skill to keep up with him. He's fighting what are essentially thugs. It's like saying Superman would take ten minutes to handle the average gang. The ability difference is just too great between them. More than that, I highly doubt Jiraiya left many of them alive. It's a good story, but there's simply no way this is realistic. Or do you not remember where Zabuza mowed down that army of bandits whilst crippled and nearly out of chakra? Sure he was killed by it, but he was also unable to use his arms, and his main talent was as a swordsman. And Zabuza is far, far below Jiraiya in skill.
reebajee chapter 9 . 7/24/2017
CrystalLover15 chapter 12 . 6/29/2017
Oh its complete already and here I asked for an update.. sorry for that I wasn't able to read the complete part yesterday just the update 2015 thing and I just finished the story today so I didn't realize it I reviewed in chapter one afterall hehe well
CrystalLover15 chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
I finallyfound this again! I dont know why it wasn't saved I'm quite sure i put this in my favorites.. This story is my favorite baby naru fic even if its incomplete I hope u can still update
Anonymous Person chapter 12 . 5/24/2017
This really was so cute, it was almost sickening. Yeah, definitely understanding your warning at the very beginning of the fic now.
Anonymous Person chapter 9 . 5/23/2017
Beats me why I didn't figure trouble would find them even in a small village.
I guess, it might be because of the latest thing with bandits but then in Naruto when have they ever had a legit break?
Anonymous Person chapter 8 . 5/23/2017
Ugh, I've commented this before on many people's fics but it just holds too true!
Why the hell is it the more perverted someone is the higher the likelihood their stupid strong. I thinking of Jiraiya, Kakashi and the Sandaime while typing this. For crying out loud Jiraiya is the author of the Icha Icha series which from what I've gathered is basically porn not to mention Kakashi and the Sandaime both read the dang series!
Anonymous Person chapter 6 . 5/23/2017
So... Damn...Cute
that'll all from me
829 | « Prev Page 1 .. 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 16 .. Last Next »