Reviews for So I would have had him leave
lilawonder chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Wow! I was so frustrated McDermid left the ending that how pleased I was to find this fic. I would love to see your take from Tony's perspective .
Nr.Six chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
Will you be writing more? Loved the chapter. Very intense. I really like to read this because in McDermid's book it was so short. There weren't many Tony/ Carol scenes. I love that you made Carol say that Tony's the love of her life! Wish you'd write more about where this is going next.
Lorrie2 chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
Oh, that is soooo sad. I can imagine that's how it happened/will happened. Excellent story you caught the characters dead on. Though I don't totally buy that Carol would blame Tony that much (which is of course from McDermid). You actually made Carol's attitude make more sense than McDermid.

great job!