|Reviews for Gilan, goats, and a grey hair|
| E.E.G chapter 1 . 5/16
Hi I noticed one small mistake. At the beginning of the story you say, "Back at his cabin in Redmont, the later is sitting one the veranda." When you are using the phrase "the latter" it always refers to the item or person listed last. four example: There was a red cup and a blue cup but only the latter was full. In this sentence it is say the there are two cups but only the blue cup is full. So in your sentence you are saying that Redmont was sitting on the veranda. It also would not work to say: the former was sitting on the veranda because the you would be saying the cabin is sitting on the veranda. You could say " back at the cabin in Redmont it was Gilan's second day of apprenticeship to Halt, Who was sitting on the Veranda reading reports. Other then that one thing I thought it was very fun and well written.
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/24
AAAAHHHHHHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHA! That was HILARIOUS! Oh. I loved it!
| Mandolyn Altman chapter 4 . 11/23/2015
Nice job, deserves a silver oakleaf. Especially how Halt started on the path to become Greybeard Halt. I wonder if Will gave Halt his first white hair. Keep up the good work.
| RandirielArratay chapter 4 . 5/13/2015
this was one of the most amazing things EVER!
| RandirielArratay chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
BEST LAST LINE EVER!
especially for it only being chapter one. :)
| Luthien Teantin chapter 4 . 3/21/2015
Ok, it's hillarious XD
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/3/2015
| PippinPie chapter 4 . 5/30/2014
Firstly, I really love these stories, they are too good to be true. I have searched far and wide for good Gilan fics and here they are. Secondly, as much as I love the story, you made a few context errors on words like 'where' and 'were'. Thirdly, I am really intrigued to know what Gilan's father was going to say to Gilan and where your ideas for punishments came from, they're so original
| booknerdhere chapter 4 . 8/1/2012
That was funny! Epicly funny! And I don't even care if epicly is not a word!
| booknerdhere chapter 3 . 8/1/2012
Poor Gilan. Poor, poor Gilan. And also: I wasn't trying to be rude on the last chapter. It was funny, but a little confusing.
| booknerdhere chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
That was... a little confusing. I hate to say it but it was.
| booknerdhere chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
XD. Halt is an old grey goat! !
| Muser chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Haha, funny. :P
| Bralt chapter 4 . 6/11/2012
Oh good gosh, I can't stop laughing. This was hilarious the way you had everybody yelling at eachother and Gilan being...Gilanish. hahahaha glad nobody was around to hear me laughing, I might of had to go to counseling
| JustaBunchaHOOPLA chapter 4 . 6/11/2012
At first when I looked at the cover, I wondered why his hair was red but then I remembered what happened in the story and I was like OHHH after I read it and whatnot :D
P.S. It was really funny!