Reviews for One sleepy phone call
readergurl2009 chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
I really enjoyed this. Also, don't worry I could not even tell than English wasn't your first language. The grammar was exceptionally good, especially if it is unbetaed (I doubt that is a word,but I still using it lol). And i liked how the characters did not seem overexaggerated like many authors seem to do, but hem seem realistic and their conversation flows. Good job!
UrbanBorn chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
i like it a lot it sounds exactly like what Derek and Penelope would say to each other
Kimd33 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
They are so sweet together.
CMfandoodle chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Very nice job with your storyline and your english writing. I also love the fact that he needs to hear Garcia's voice before falling a sleep. Nice job!
LoveforPenandDerek chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
I think you did great with the spelling and grammer. I appreciate all your efforts to make it your best. This was a fun read. Love Morgan and Garcia's flirty relationship.
jenny crum chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
A great story, I love how he likes to hear her voice before he goes to sleep.

I can't wait to read more of your stories
Monnie32 chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
Good start