Reviews for The Veil
HappyEndingLover chapter 15 . 2/15/2023
Wow that was deep I kept trying to figure it out.
HappyEndingLover chapter 3 . 2/15/2023
I really like your writing style!
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 15 . 9/30/2022
This was unexpected and hard to digest. But so it is...life and death.
Three months ago, I lost two members of my family whithin 2 weeks and a dear friend 4 weeks after. The first was my aunt, she was relieved after dementia first took her away, then her body was suffering from consequences of falling twice, one last surgery she never recovered from. Two weeks later, her daughter, my dear cousin, widowed mother of two boys age 17 and 22, lost her long fight against breast cancer. After first things seemed to get to a happy ending, her health took a turn for the worst in the span of 10 days. Three weeks later, a man I called my friend, a What-if relationship I was still in hope for "one day", got brutally killed in a fight with a business partner who lost control and attacked him , killed him and then took his own life.
Writing this and reading it again, I can still not fathom the loss and how we all, who knew them and loved them, are able to let them all go so suddenly.
Reading your story, as confusing as it was to me at times, it also was almost soothing. Almost. I understand your need to desect and think through and put into words those thoughts and emotions on and around death when confronted with our own limits and the feeling of being powerless and having no influence or control over our own fate or that of our loved ones.
It's the hardest human subject of them all to come to terms with.
I hope you were able to gain whatever it is you've been aiming at, while writing it.
Your words are precious and always genuinely touch and capture and take my breath away...
Thank you for sharing.
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 12 . 9/27/2022
I'm starting to understand that there cannot be a hea in the common sense.
I'm very sorry you've had to be dealing with loss and I can very much relate.
I admire your creative ways to cope and get through difficult times.
Thank you for sharing. Hugs to you.
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 11 . 9/27/2022
Please...HEA. Please?
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 10 . 9/27/2022
Switching from my kindle to here so I can leave reviews. I have to express how much I'm intrigued by your exploring and philosophizing about death, illness and life the way it should be lived.
It's mindblowing and soothing, yet devastating. As vague as you're being, understandably so, I have difficulty seeing the possibilities Bella would be given to base a decision on. Is Ed asking for forever because he would be able to give her eternal life? Is she deciding between living to the end or ending her life on her own terms? But I guess I'll find out soon enough.
Thank you for sharing this!
BethMasenCullen chapter 1 . 9/25/2022
I'm not sure how I haven't read this already, but someone mentioned it on FB so I decided to check it out. I have a feeling I am going to need tissues lol.
jen5795 chapter 15 . 4/9/2022
WOW!, I was not expecting him to be death, but it was very fitting. I really enjoyed reading this.
Sassyvampmama chapter 15 . 5/30/2019
This was beautiful, and heart rending. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Guest chapter 15 . 12/2/2018
Good story but very poorly edited.
Guest chapter 15 . 6/23/2018
Very confusing...made no sense to me and didn’t really like this Edward
luvyateamedward chapter 15 . 12/13/2017
Great writing! Thanks for sharing.
LoveBite92 chapter 15 . 10/25/2016
OK I'm very much lost. Please help me out. So Edward was some sort of God/Nicholas Cage in City of Angels character that could determine when a person would die. He falls in love with Bella who is a dying oncologist and a life cynic. Then he tried to turn her into whatever he is through Katrina, she finally accepts and then they find a cure for her liver problems. Only for them to get into a car crash, which he knew about, in which she seems to end up vegetative and he takes care of her until his mortal death? I think I get it and I love how different this concept is from everything else but I am still baffled. Please help! xx
LoveBite92 chapter 15 . 10/25/2016
OK I'm very much lost. Please help me out. So Edward was some sort of God/Nicholas Cage in City of Angels character that could determine when a person would die. He falls in love with Bella who is a dying oncologist and a life cynic. Then he tried to turn her into whatever he is through Katrina, she finally accepts and then they find a cure for her liver problems. Only for them to get into a car crash, which he knew about, in which she seems to end up vegetative and he takes care of her until his mortal death? I think I get it and I love how different this concept is from everything else but I am still baffled. Please help! xx
jk chapter 8 . 5/23/2016
did he really say that? and bella left with him? ummm hell no!
I would have walked away right then...
I want to suckle at your breast and fuck you raw?

ewww
LOL
there is nothing sexy about what Edward said...that would have made me shrivel up seriously...id be like "annnnnd bye"
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