Reviews for The Veil
weedstert chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Not sure if Bella is sick or just seems a bit off due to the heavy burden of coping with and treating the sick and dying...she's lucky to have a guy like Edward to come home to ...he seems very attentive, loving, and supportive.

Thanks...love your writing :)
Lilypad10 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Wow! Very interesting and wow! I can not wait for the next chapter!
Scrimmy chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
WIERDLY I LIKE THIS ONE. IT IS REAL. I THINK I LIKE IT BECAUSE IT IS CHARACTERS I AM NOT ATTACHED TO. I DIDN'T CATCH ANY VAMPIRE REFERENCES. IS EDWRD A VAMPIRE IN THIS ONE? AS LONG AS HE AND BELLA ARE TOGETHER AND GET A HEA I'M GOOD. HUGS, BOBBIE
malleelee chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
A frank look at the oncology service of a hospital, its patients, doctors, residents, nursing staff, tech staff, hope and death. As a pill-popping depressive, my thoughts may seem skewered.
longtobeme chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Love this story. So, Edward is a vampire?
AceSunshine chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Wow. So dark and deep. I admire you writing a story about what you do each day and it cannot be easy. As a Doctor and know that all you can do is bring them comfort in their last days has to be so frustrating. Facing family members who refuse to give up or face the inevitable. I am looking forward to seeing where u take this story. I need to read through this a second time to see if I

can try and see if i can understand Bella's inner monologue when she is home with Edward. Is she her self sick or is the stress of her daily job just bringing her down. We will have to see.
ana1973 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Well the first chapter seems interesting. I dont really know where you are going with it which is actually better because and it isn't predictable so far. Looking forward to reading more.
JustSu chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
This topic hurts me. Too close to my heart and recent life experiences. But I'll give it a chance bcause I love how you write, those short sentences, accurate words, beautiful images.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for sharing.
sarahlouise80 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
fab story that was so it.
greeneyedgirly chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Interesting... can't wait to see where you take this.
movieandbookgirl chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
It's an interesting start. I'm looking forward to reading more :)
Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
You've found a window

Lit with a soul

Strafing the dark

Waters of our nature

We few tread

Dance of life

Is but a melody

Stars and bars

Maybe a chorus

But always a refrain

To close

This work is beautiful

R
Erroneous78 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Wow BDC! I really thought I was seeing things when I saw this update in my inbox! No pre warnings!

However that said, and as dark and raw as it is, once again you draw me in.

Im intrigued to find out how and where everyone fits, why Bella is the way she is.

Looking forward to more dark & twisty xxx
lippylou chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
I know this is going to be dark & I'm going to try & stick with it for as long as I can. My mum died from cancer (undiagnosed until right at the end) in May last year. She went very quickly - within a week of the diagnosis. I think she just gave up & willed herself to die. There was no treatment they could have given her anyway.

Annette
MrsK81 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Really really good start, can't wait to read more!
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