Reviews for The Veil
longtobeme chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Love this story. So, Edward is a vampire?
AceSunshine chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Wow. So dark and deep. I admire you writing a story about what you do each day and it cannot be easy. As a Doctor and know that all you can do is bring them comfort in their last days has to be so frustrating. Facing family members who refuse to give up or face the inevitable. I am looking forward to seeing where u take this story. I need to read through this a second time to see if I

can try and see if i can understand Bella's inner monologue when she is home with Edward. Is she her self sick or is the stress of her daily job just bringing her down. We will have to see.
ana1973 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Well the first chapter seems interesting. I dont really know where you are going with it which is actually better because and it isn't predictable so far. Looking forward to reading more.
JustSu chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
This topic hurts me. Too close to my heart and recent life experiences. But I'll give it a chance bcause I love how you write, those short sentences, accurate words, beautiful images.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for sharing.
sarahlouise80 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
fab story that was so it.
greeneyedgirly chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Interesting... can't wait to see where you take this.
movieandbookgirl chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
It's an interesting start. I'm looking forward to reading more :)
Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
You've found a window

Lit with a soul

Strafing the dark

Waters of our nature

We few tread

Dance of life

Is but a melody

Stars and bars

Maybe a chorus

But always a refrain

To close

This work is beautiful

R
Erroneous78 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Wow BDC! I really thought I was seeing things when I saw this update in my inbox! No pre warnings!

However that said, and as dark and raw as it is, once again you draw me in.

Im intrigued to find out how and where everyone fits, why Bella is the way she is.

Looking forward to more dark & twisty xxx
lippylou chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
I know this is going to be dark & I'm going to try & stick with it for as long as I can. My mum died from cancer (undiagnosed until right at the end) in May last year. She went very quickly - within a week of the diagnosis. I think she just gave up & willed herself to die. There was no treatment they could have given her anyway.

Annette
MrsK81 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Really really good start, can't wait to read more!
TwistStix chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
The way you write is so captivating there is no way I couldn't read it. And you do dark so well :)
Fiyaaa chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Sounds interesting :)

And I'm a fan of all your stories x
ReluctantRomantic chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
It's not exactly accurate to say I'm looking forward to more of this, and yet I am. I lost my mother last July so it's really where my head and heart has been of late.

I always thought I really understood and respected that death is a natural process. I now get it at a whole new level after struggling with some very difficult decisions. During the thick of it, and certainly when it was over, I found I had a very visceral understanding of and confidence in my choices.

Thank you for addressing a subject so commonly eschewed, yet so very real for all of us.
tff000 chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
so emotionally charged. wondering if b is sick as well. wondering if this story will end well or in tragedy - just trying to prepare as your writing can bring out so much
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