|Reviews for Cliché|
| Guest chapter 23 . 2/6
I like cliché(s)
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/26
Loved your story! Well done!
| riskeybusiness chapter 26 . 1/18
Adorable. Well written and loved every moment of it :) thanks for sharing!
| Chryslovesand chapter 26 . 1/10
Great story! Absolutely loved the fluff... I appreciate angst like the next fan fic reader, but the fun stories as always a pleasure. Thanks for sharing.
| Kat chapter 5 . 11/7/2014
You really made Hermione a nasty person in the story. It is becoming hard to read with such an unlikable main character.
She seems unreasonable and at this point downright cruel with no provocation.
| kathyjo chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
good start but it does drive me crazy when she just assumes he will not want a child he has a right to know and if he does yell so be it at least you know where he stands you deal and move he finds out quickly
| jensteed chapter 24 . 10/2/2014
Aww Severus with his kids is just adorable, Sebastian standing wrapped around his leg was such a lovely image :)
| jensteed chapter 13 . 10/2/2014
I'm having a blast reading this story, I'm just laughing the whole way through. I don't even know why but the note at the end set me off in fits again. I'm still snickering at it.
| jensteed chapter 12 . 10/2/2014
"LALALAI'MGOINGNOW" haha, I couldn't stop laughing. Poor Harry ;)
| jensteed chapter 6 . 10/1/2014
Ooh that was very Slytherin of Harry, hehe. Sneaking in Snape (twice now) though I wonder if this time will go down any easier with Hermione? And it's probably not the best way to keep her stress levels down either..thinking about it more, it's bloody a stupid move.
Absolutely brilliant story!
| jensteed chapter 5 . 10/1/2014
This was such a fantastic chapter, I was giggling through her spat with Harry XD
| CeilidhStewart chapter 17 . 9/28/2014
Your note at the bottom is SO true. Thank you for pointing it out. As a teacher myself, I've always found it hard to appreciate stories where a teacher falls in love with a teenage student.
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/20/2014
Honestly, if she's this irrational towards the father, I can't imagine her attitude towards the baby once it becomes her source of frustration. Severus should try to get custody away from this crazy woman.
| jessica441 chapter 26 . 8/20/2014
I loved the little out takes you did:)
| jessica441 chapter 7 . 8/18/2014
I have to say that line where Hermione says she doesn't understand how severes's treatment of his students and children would be different, makes me think that Hermione is a bit of a nit wit. oh it could be the hormones...
this is shaping up to be very enjoyable :)