Reviews for Omens
Tara chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Oh my goodness! I've never read a story that was set before the series and this one literally took my breath away. Wonderfully written! Oh my goodness, I love every little bit of this and how much it portrays despite being under 1,000 words. This is truly brilliant, great work!
Different Child chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Brilliant and quite interesting. I love this take on things! I always imagined their mother died in childbirth with Ozai as well. And awwww. *hugs* This is fabulous. Completely amazing.
FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Wow nice one-shot.
boxed-princess chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Such a sad little piece. Oh how it could have been.

Omens are self-fulfilled, aren't they?

I love the ending. I really do love the ending.
Analie Janes chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Ooh I loved this! I think you wrote the characterizations of young Iroh and Azulon well. This makes perfect sense as to why Azulon did not favour Ozai (and perhaps that is why Ozai favoured his second child). Good job! :)

Jokermask18 chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Luna Cat Kitty chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Why did it take me so long to find this on FFN! D:

As I said before, awesome story and it again, makes me day. x3

Thanks a ton. :3
Spry chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Woohoo! *Applauds MADLY*

Good job! I have always wondered where Iroh and Ozai's mother was. Does Ozai really sound like a word for "calamity"?

Well anyway, give yourself a cookie! You deserve it. :)

ShoeNinja chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Beautifully written. It's a very interesting take on this family.
threebadjs chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
holy shiiit the last sentance made the whole fuckin story good job man