|Reviews for Kushina's Loss, Akatsuki's Gain|
| Omegaphantom x chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
Try a harem that way you get everyone u like add kushina too
| S-Wanderer999 chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
A nice story and I think it's going to be quite interesting when Naruto gets back to Konoha (and I do see Naruto asking both Sarutobi and even the Council if he has to in order to keep Kushina away from him). As for the story Nagato gave of Itachi abandoning Naruto in Ame, I would change it to Itachi leaving Naruto in Ame while he went elsewhere so that both him and Naruto could be safe (the reason for the story change is because Sasuke is still an unknown and I doubt Itachi wants his brother to hate him). Speaking of Kushina, what is Nagato's opinion of her (especially since he is an Uzumaki as well).
As for Sarutobi, Kakashi and Jiraiya I can see them all being happy Naruto is okay but sad that he wants nothing to do with Konoha (and I can see them being the only three that Naruto will let know that the Kyuubi is out of Naruto).
As for Naruto's team for the Chuunin exams, my suggestion is to have Konan as the jonin-sensei, having Sasori use either his body or another human puppet body (since he looks so young), and the other 'genin' I leave to you (whether it's an OC genin of some level of strength, or another ninja taking on the role of genin for Naruto's team).
As for who to pair Naruto with, I'll admit that I'm torn. I'm stuck between three choices as to which woman to choose, and they are: Yugito Nii, Fu, and Mei Terumi. Two of them are jinchuuriki and the third became the Godaime Mizukage (and I don't know if this story will have Naruto be with one or multiple ladies).
And speaking of Naruto. what changes if any did he undergo when Kyuubi was removed (ie. was his healing ability affected or not)?
Anyways keep up the good work.
| Eddman32 chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
Naruto x kushina
| mfmxxx chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
It's an alright fic.
I'd like to see a Naruto x Sakura for once.
| aprilliarsv chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
It was pretty good. I'm not a fan of detailed training chapters... But I'm looking forward to your next update.
| unrealwarfang chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
Great chapter I vote for either Yugito or Samui to be pared with Naruto mainly Yugito if you can find a way to extract the Nibi without her dieing. Looking forward to the next chapter can't wait to see how Kushina will act when Naruto is back in Konoha
| th4n chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
Hi there, voting for Naruto x Mei.
| Gia-Sekando chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
nice an i vote mei
| Shiro chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
| I Lost a bet to Madara chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
I Vote Naruto and Mei Terumi! Make Mei an Uzumaki!
| ddcj1990 chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
Awesome I really like how strong Naruto has become I cant wait for Naruto to return to Konoha for the Chunin Exam and to find out how will everyone react seeing him with a Amegakure headband also I really think you should have Naruto paired with Samui or Tayuya update soon please
| ddcj1990 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Wow great first chapter I really like it alot
| omegahurricane chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
It is good so far. I have noticed that there are times that you seem to be referencing to two characters when you mention anything about Naruto arriving in Ame, usually with the word "both" (example: Nagato say to Naruto at the end of this chapter, "Naruto, over the past 7 years you've both improved greatly, there is one more test you must undertake however[...]"), but other than that no large errors. Also, I vote for NarutoxIno.
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
Gotta be honest with you here: I didn't like the chapter because of all the timeskips and journal entries or flashbacks. There were too freakin' many of them and I pretty much skipped each one...which means I skipped half the chapter because there were so many.
We don't need to know what he's doing/learning every second of the day. We don't need to know every little technique. We also don't need to know Akatsuki's every tiny step. A short description of his training and the group's deeds would've been far better, and it would've taken up maybe a few paragraphs. We would've learned about the jutsu as we read further into the story. I personally just plain hate it being shoved into my face all at once, which is what you did. This just distracted and detracted from the rest of the story because these parts were so long and basically useless in the long run.
I also hate polls where the writer says, "Vote to get it your way!" You're the author; it's your job to take care of the plot. Not everyone's going to be happy with your decision, but it's your story, not theirs, and they'll get over it. If you need someone to tell you what to do, then you're not really the writer after all, are you?
Anyway, don't take my words too harshly. Every writer's got a bad chapter and the point is to learn from it. Besides, this is my opinion and others may disagree.
| onslaught172 chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
I like the story but can u show use kushina reaction to all this next time