Reviews for Pinned but Fluttering Outtakes
davysekhon chapter 7 . 1/17
It's truly a unique and awesome collection of outtakes of the original story. Very expressive and enlightening all throughout to the end. Thank you.
Motherof8 chapter 6 . 8/21/2014
Great chapter. Yay for rosalie
Motherof8 chapter 3 . 8/20/2014
Awesome
Motherof8 chapter 2 . 8/20/2014
Great chapter
whilewewereyetsinners chapter 7 . 7/24/2014
I really enjoyed Pinned but Fluttering, and these outtakes! I especially liked your Carlisle, and all the changes/plot twists the story had. I'm glad you let Seth survive- he's one of my favorite secondary characters. (And yes, I am reading my way through all your stories, and having great fun while doing it. I suppose being sick has its advantages!) ;)
BridieM chapter 7 . 6/30/2014
Excellent writing. Thank you. :D
BridieM chapter 6 . 6/30/2014
Rose has risen in my estimation. Thank you for such a good death for Jerkob. yay! I am not a violent person...mostly. ;D
BridieM chapter 5 . 6/30/2014
Yep. Ready. aim. fire. Such a shame to waste so many bullets. However, in RL I don't like guns. Don't own one. Know how to shoot. But feel a lot safer without one. Great writing. :D
BridieM chapter 4 . 6/30/2014
Psychotic mongrel. Sorry. I am heavily involved in reading TrillionSchiffer's story New Eclipse. It is brilliant (under appreciated) with aggressive wolves (total mongrel Jerkob), where he/she has played with SM's universe. The best war scene with the new borns/Victoria and ... has only a couple of chapters to go with the sequel partially written. My review regarding automatic weapons was pinched from Victoria's attack strategy on the Res. I just want to take a few potshots at Jerkob. ;) Jazz is calming me a bit. ;P
BridieM chapter 3 . 6/29/2014
Thank you for this one. I am thirsty just reading it. To early for a Southern Comfort and lemonade...Damn. ;P
BridieM chapter 2 . 6/29/2014
I enjoyed this outtake. It did fill in some missing pieces. :D
Fleur50 chapter 7 . 6/9/2014
:o)
Fleur50 chapter 6 . 2/21/2014
...;0)
Fleur50 chapter 5 . 2/21/2014
:D)
Fleur50 chapter 4 . 2/21/2014
:-)
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