Reviews for Pinned but Fluttering Outtakes
FinnMac chapter 6 . 10/25/2016
Go Rosalie.
FinnMac chapter 5 . 10/25/2016
Interesting, Jacob didn't sound like a foaming-at-the-mouth wolf. He sounded like every other crazy wife beater. Revelatory.
FinnMac chapter 4 . 10/25/2016
I don't know how they all contained their bloodlust.
FinnMac chapter 3 . 10/24/2016
OK, so normal Edward stuff.
FinnMac chapter 2 . 10/23/2016
From apathy to agony. What's Edward's problem?
FinnMac chapter 1 . 10/23/2016
Interesting. 28 hours?
debslmac chapter 7 . 8/27/2015
:) loved these outtakes
davysekhon chapter 7 . 1/17/2015
It's truly a unique and awesome collection of outtakes of the original story. Very expressive and enlightening all throughout to the end. Thank you.
Motherof8 chapter 6 . 8/21/2014
Great chapter. Yay for rosalie
Motherof8 chapter 3 . 8/20/2014
Awesome
Motherof8 chapter 2 . 8/20/2014
Great chapter
whilewewereyetsinners chapter 7 . 7/24/2014
I really enjoyed Pinned but Fluttering, and these outtakes! I especially liked your Carlisle, and all the changes/plot twists the story had. I'm glad you let Seth survive- he's one of my favorite secondary characters. (And yes, I am reading my way through all your stories, and having great fun while doing it. I suppose being sick has its advantages!) ;)
BridieM chapter 7 . 6/30/2014
Excellent writing. Thank you. :D
BridieM chapter 6 . 6/30/2014
Rose has risen in my estimation. Thank you for such a good death for Jerkob. yay! I am not a violent person...mostly. ;D
BridieM chapter 5 . 6/30/2014
Yep. Ready. aim. fire. Such a shame to waste so many bullets. However, in RL I don't like guns. Don't own one. Know how to shoot. But feel a lot safer without one. Great writing. :D
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