|Reviews for The time of our lives|
| cutielove077 chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Oh man! I love that "CONGRATS, HATTORI!" at the end. hehehe
| La Clef A Verite chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Aww that was cute and I burst out laughing in the end :D
I'm always terrified of writing in future tense, because if not done properly, it's just annoying.
You pulled it off and I commend you for that.
I'm also quite happy that this is a one-shot. Your story, I think, isn't meant to be the most unique story ever; it's more to showcase your writing skills. If it was a multi-chaptered fic, it might get boring, pretty quickly too.
As soon as I read that Heiji was dating another girl, I almost groaned out loud, but you handled pretty well and it didn't make me cringe.
Overall, it was just really cute and well-written, even if the plot isn't anything new. I liked it :)
| Jazzy Uchiha chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
| salimaran08 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
wonderful,this story is good for several chapters,not a simple oneshot,thanks anyway ;)