Reviews for Tell Me What You See
littlebirds chapter 1 . 11/18
The passage describing the effects of the moon upon Bill is incredibly effective. I could instantly sympathise with him wanting to remove himself from Fleur's sphere, though he *must* be mad to think she'd every let him go without a fight. Beautifully done.
X-xx-SugarBerries-xx-X chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
One word: Beautiful
Louey06 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
This was great. I love Fleur, someone had to smack some sense into that boy!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Awww... so sweet.
Tulips77720 chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
Really Nice Little One Shot... Good Job...
respitechristopher chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Beautiful and touching and just wonderful. You've got these characters down to a science.
lightblue-Nymphadora chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
That was beautiful. The aftermath of Bill's attack is rarely explored. You did a great job. :)
alix33 chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
Rose of the West chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
As a part-veela, isn't there a bit of monster somewhere in her makeup, too?

I like the way she makes him look beyond the surface beauty or difficulty.
silverbirch chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
A lovely story, but who else can write these two like you.

The key line, "You are not asking me, Bill," she said firmly. "I am making a choice.".

I think every writer on here should remember that when we're making our heroes noble and self-sacrificing.
MBP chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
So beautiful and so perfect, Katy. As always, you get them right.
brigrove chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
beautiful, sad and sweet
Il'Diko chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
As always, a perfect characterisation!

Interesting, and not far-fetched idea how you interpreted Bill being bitten. They together can overcome it, though!

Nice fic!
Rheta chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
That was beautiful.