|Reviews for Our Beats Incarnate|
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/9
You have a very well developed writing style that is perfect for this kind of story, complimented by a colourful vocabulary. Your work is a pleasure to read!
| Wes Craven chapter 16 . 4/25
The long awaited chapter 2 of book 3 didn't exactly disappoint me so much as it left me with more questions than answers. Not exactly a bad thing, as I hope that they're answered when you continue. The only issue I noticed with this chapter is that there are a significantly higher amount of typos and grammatical errors than any of your previous chapters, that makes me think that it might've been a bit rushed.
| STr222 chapter 3 . 1/10
I don't think there are chunks of pork in there, it's more like chunks of tofu.
| Fleeting Flash chapter 1 . 1/3
Hi there! Thank you very much for your time and effort writing this story. I just finished the anime lately, then I became a die-hard fan of Angel Beats! Thus looking through the internet for some stories for Kanade and Yuzuru after they've passed on from the Afterlife. This story is so great, and the greatest one I've read. It also still has the conmections from the anime. And the vocabulary you've put is amazing! I hope you'll continue the chapter 3 as soon as possible. Have a great day. :)
| VincBej chapter 16 . 11/2/2015
Hello there ! :)
That's a really nice story you're writting. I especialy loved the first arc, it was really sweet. After that though, the rest of the story feels kinda weird to me : maybe that's because we know from the start how it's gonna end... I dont know.
But still, I enjoyed your story and will be waiting for its continuation ;)
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2015
Are you gone again senpaaaaaaaiiiiii :'(
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/27/2015
Enjoying the variety in plot
| areyes199999 chapter 5 . 9/22/2015
| Ickaser chapter 16 . 8/28/2015
Well, I for one would love to see you continue this. Books I and II were excellent. Your writing is skillful and you portray the characters so well. I haven't enjoyed many fanfics as thoroughly as I did this. Thanks for what you do!
| PrinceRazor chapter 16 . 7/11/2015
Oh yes! I haven't checked the angel beats part of FF but I'm exetremely happy I did!
It's been so long I reread everything, and it was just as good as I remem. Keep up the good work! I await your next chapter however long it takes!
| HeroBladeRiyet chapter 16 . 7/10/2015
Just started reading and gotta say this story is pretty awesome! Keep it up
| Ogio Ecchibana chapter 7 . 6/23/2015
can I kick you in the balls? please!
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/21/2015
I have to second qwqs in that it felt sudden with the change in attitude with their relationship. But I'm still happy more chapters are coming out (and pretty fast too :P).
| qwqs chapter 17 . 6/21/2015
Hmm... it seems a little unnatural. I don't know how to put it, but the fact that Yuzuru suddenly cheered up Kanade, whom he had a relationship of a little than that of stranger, was a bit unrealistic. I mean, normally you wouldn't be so dare to comment about the person you barely know. For example, "whatever they say, let them say it," and so on. I think it is a bit presumptuous, consider the distant between them.
Sure, maybe he was her secret admirer, but it is still weird, especially, since he got dismissed by her before (and every time at that). So I doubt where was his courage come from? Sure, he may be able to start a bit of a conversation this time, but the intimate points seems to not be enough yet (From my crazy dating sim logic, anyway).
Well, anyway, good luck. Looking forward for you to finish this!
P.S. Talk about others, I, myself, have been putting my projects on hold for a long while already, ha ha.
| TinyPalm chapter 17 . 6/21/2015
Awesome chapter. I second Tsubodai's comment that this is as enjoyable as the canon, regardless of genre. You write better romance stories than Maeda-san :)
The three books have completely different settings; the reader doesn't know what to expect so plot-wise it's very engaging. The pace is just right; slow enough to let emotions grow but still moving things forward with every chapter. Characterization is good; I especially love how you portray Angel, as I'm sure many other fans do (tho I'm not sure Otonashi has that big of a temper haha). My biggest quirk, tho, is in its believability, in particular the relationship between Otonashi and Tenshi (from his reaction in chapter 2, it seemed his foremost intention was only to apologise to Tenshi. It seems a bit strange that he suddenly became her secret admirer, and littering her room with flowers seemed a little over the top). Also, Kanade, being as big a celebrity as she is and used to having her own fans and "stalkers and lingering photographers", she is likely used to fans sending her all sorts of presents and flowers already, so her heart soaring on seeing a blue rose also seems a little far-fetched.
But then these are all small details that I've noticed. The story as a whole is still awesome. (I've been a fan ever since the first book, so blame my unconsciously raised expectations after making me wait two years (demon-face))