Reviews for Base Metal
Blonde-Existentialist chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
This is wonderful imagery and use of the surroundings scenery as well as subtle inner thoughts.
jessica-semnadaprafaze123 chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
xXMistressMadHatterXx chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
This was so lovely. Just like Gendry, our fictions are babies too. And this one is a beauty!
blackeyedbandit chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Wow that was so sad and so beautiful. The way to described Gendry's opinion of himself was just so perfect . There was this shyness and humbleness about it that just works for him . great work I can't wait to read your future works :)
Snowdrop-143 chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE - seriously I could type that all day- PLEASE continue this story! I adore the Gendry you've caputured it just fits so perfectly it makes me want to weep, seriously I am seriously deprived of Genry Arya FF - I mean eventually I will write my own once all the kinks in the plot have been worked out an dall the Chapters drafted but please give a direwolf a bone! or a horn :D - if you dnt futher this could you atleast pm if you're doing any new ASoIaF especially AryaX Gendry FF ?

THis is awesome Gendry PoV PLEASE - ok now I'm just sounding desperate XD but seriously great character imitation and the writing on the stream of consiousness is good too at time a bit shallow but the simplicity fits this story in this moment - hope that was constructive enough besides my raving :D
Hades'Queen chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
Incredibly cute. I love it.
theundyinglands chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
As someone who ADORES Arya/Gendry, I must say that I LOVED this xD Good work.
Laine Montgomery chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
I LOVE this. There are so few stories told from Gendry's perspective, but it never occurred to me to wonder why before I read this story. I really like the sensory phrasing in here- the descriptions of the forge in the first paragraph is particularly vivid. And the whole relationship between Gendry and Arya is wonderful and perfect- he acknowledges that she's a lady, higher-born than him, but instead of dwelling on it, he gives her whatever is in his power to give. Excellent, excellent work!