|Reviews for Why does it feel so bad to be special?|
| SaraTheFox chapter 5 . 7/14
Yay! First comment in 2017. Anyways. I like the story but there should be some periods in some places and I think you do a lot of show don't tell in the first couple of chapters but over all it's an good story.
| HopelesslyDaring chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
Not to be rude, just some improving criticism. Where are any of your periods in your paragraphs? It bugs me a little. I find like 5 ands. You just have a lot of run-on sentences. Good book, though.
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/5/2013
Is there gonna be a sequel
| LaineyK123 chapter 5 . 3/1/2012
Nice job on this! You got Malachai's personality down pretty well. Good job, can't wait to read other stories as well. :)
| HoneyGee08 chapter 5 . 2/6/2012
a little short but great.
| HoneyGee08 chapter 4 . 2/6/2012
great chapter but the whole burn malachi thing was a little to much.
| HoneyGee08 chapter 3 . 2/2/2012
Thanks for the shout out greate update. update soon!
| HoneyGee08 chapter 2 . 1/31/2012
thats was great update soon
| HoneyGee08 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
update soon this is good