Reviews for The final battle
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2015
John was indifferent to wolves, he wouldnt have cared at all about the little scared wolf. The fanfic seemed rather dramatic but I guess translating it to a movie would make it seem more focused. Also a wolf would never back out of a fight involving the alpha, especially when the alpha allows them there, because that wolf would likely become the new alpha. NOW after all the little factuals and my opinions, you did some great writing :) keep at it. Event though this is from 4 years ago, maybe you still read these things?
bryann chapter 1 . 1/16/2015
Wait you made that up? That was great
I.AM.LORD.VOLDEMORT.394 chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
brilliant. I think the reason there wasn't more Ottway vs Wolf is because it was such a personal movie if you know what I mean
Timeless Miracle chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
really touching also amazing detail in the fight scene, and FINALLY an ending to the movie/storyline
biohazard22 chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Absolutely amazing... Exactly how i pictured the ending
Phoenix xxxxx chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Yes, reviews are awesome, as is your story! I really wanted something like this in the movie as well; the end made me so sad (I cried)! Keep up the good work!
shaykeleher85 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Nice, really well written. I felt like I was watching a scene from the movie and I'm spewing there was more after the credits I didn't stick around to see. If I could make one suggestion it seemed like the Grey survived too long after the wound to the jugular. I was under the impression that after that artery is severed death occurs often in less than a minute. But having said that its fiction not a doco and I can totally understand why the Grey needed to last that long in order for Ottway to have that dying moment with it. Pretty brilliant overall. Thanks for the story.
dolphins9763 chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
LOVED your ending! This is so much better than the movie!
PerryRocks- Wolf Warrior chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
O.O WOAH! This looks better than it does in the PM XDDD I think I should see this movie...