Reviews for Fruit of Love
Jillo96 chapter 19 . 12/30/2012
You made Molly appear as a women that always needed to depend on a man. And the killing of Chase was a hackneyed ending. Otherwise the fic was entertaining and witty.
Jillo96 chapter 20 . 12/30/2012
I love the story hated the ending, it's a shame. You made M
Lexi1130 chapter 20 . 11/30/2012
Thank you for writing this wonderful story. I was weeping so hard after reading your story. Kakaiyak talaga. Waaaaah!
LegendarypkmnNyunyu chapter 19 . 10/26/2012
D-dammit... I cried...
J-just... Keep writing nad ganbatte, kay...
KRock9585 chapter 18 . 10/23/2012
This chapter was sooooooo sad! I almost cried! You expressed the emotion so well! You are such an amazing writer! Can't wait to read more!
HM-Lover chapter 18 . 10/22/2012
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please write more! I would do more pleases if I wasn't typing on my iPod. That's right, when my dad made me get off of the computer I found your story on here. I can't believe Luna called off the engagement. I thought that she would put up more of a fight. I predict that Chase will come back and that he and Gill will have a major showdown but since Gill was gone for so long that Chase will win. I don't know, maybe Luke will reveal his never ending crush if Chase does die so there will still be a showdown. Please update soon! How much sleep I get depends on it!
Guest chapter 18 . 10/22/2012
Thank you for a new chapter and not making Luna a brat! She is actually a sweet heart.
blacksunset1214 chapter 17 . 10/17/2012
Oh shit, update soon! I NEED to know what happens!
Guest chapter 17 . 10/16/2012
WOAH. That was not how i expected the cliffhanger to be! Great chapter! I loved it! Please update soon! xxx
blacksunset1214 chapter 16 . 10/11/2012
Um, is this going to stay a MollyxChase? I feel like they have a lot of chemistry, so if she just randomly started having flings with Gill after telling Chase she loved him, it wouldn't have the same effect.

Oh, and watch out for grammar/mechanical errors, like comma splices, for example. Also, 'chocked' is spelled 'choked'. Other than that, I look forward to reading the next chapter!
XxMillionMidnightsxX chapter 15 . 10/4/2012
:O KEEP WRITING! I MUST NO WHAT HAPPENS :_ its the harvest moon love story i never had!
krock95 chapter 15 . 10/2/2012
You are such an amazing writer! This story just brings out so many emotions! I love it!
X-Lady Black Pearl-X chapter 13 . 9/11/2012
Ah, I just started this story last night and absolutely love it! Please continue.
Poke-Polished chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
The festival change is no big deal! Don't worry about it. Im curious to see more of Gills point of view! However I am leaning towards her and Chase!
Akari0128 chapter 12 . 8/19/2012
Yay! This means Gill is almost coming back :D Gill x Akari forever :D
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