|Reviews for The Chance of Change|
| Vernica chapter 14 . 7/4
Leer tu historia fue todo un viaje, lo escribiste tan coherente que me hizo recordar buenos tiempos de cuando estaba por salir de la preparatoria pero también disfruté mucho ver a mis personajes favoritos en este tipo de situaciones por las que todos normalmente pasamos. Siempre leí los capítulos con una sonrisa soñadora :) de mis favoritos fue el día de la venganza en la escuela, no podía dejar de leer y soltar risitas... ojalá y eso se hiciera en donde yo vivo.
Una pena que esté incompleto... después de tantos años dudo que se llegues a terminar la historia, pero si por alguna razón pasa, estaré aquí para leerlo.
| 8420995 chapter 1 . 4/5
I read this on ao3 and really enjoyed it. I laughed at the part where Ranma was like, "Don't wanna crush ya!" LOLLLL Good work with this!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2017
Thank you so so much for sharing this story with us. I read this fic for a week and wow. So floored with... everything. I can tell that this story is as much as one's coming-of-age story, injecting realism in characters we all love and to witness an organic development if Takahashi-san made the story less crazy (lol). There were so many relatable things from the story that has honestly got me thinking about my own life. As with others in the review section, your Ranma and Akane is so endearing and I appreciate the amount of care you put into depicting the changes in their relationship as the story progresses. One scene that caught me, hook line and sinker, would be the final scene between Akane and Soun at the end of Chapter 8 (Part I). It made me sigh and my heart ache for your Soun. I'll be looking forward to see how you end this story. Regardless of the future, thank you for sharing this story.
All the best,
| FlameDancerStar chapter 14 . 3/12/2017
very well written story
| FlameDancerStar chapter 4 . 3/10/2017
I love this story...making me feel like I am in high school all over and can't wait to finish it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2016
Just read your bio! Yaaaaaaaaay! I check up on this story every once in a while, bc can't shake it! It's been YEARS!
Don't let me die not knowing how it ends, pleeeeeare!
| akrim chapter 14 . 10/1/2016
You know this fic is just so amazimg, i really love tge dynamics and all. Do you think you will update one day? Id really love it!
| Bobbwa chapter 1 . 8/15/2015
I thought about this story, today, and had to run home a find it. I still love it!
| Bobbwa chapter 15 . 3/8/2015
This is the most romantic story I have ever read. Ever. I've put my tablet down a couple times because I've felt like a peeping Tom spying in on these beautifully written, intimate moments. You know your characters so well. And have taken the best parts of every personality and given them more depth and humanity, making this, hands down, the best fan fiction I have ever had the delight to read. I've honestly read this in one weekend and look forward to going back again. And again. I hope ill get more. I'm greedy and it's fiction like this that's sticks around with me. This one will keep me up at nights if it doesn't ever come to a conclusion. Thank you so much for letting me live the adventure of first romances once again.
| Tsukoblue chapter 15 . 6/7/2014
Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens nexr!
| Angela Jewell chapter 15 . 2/2/2014
Oh. Oh, oh, oh, oh! Where has my head been? How could I have missed this chapter?! I wonder if my love for this fanfic predates the favorite/follow feature on the site, which is why I missed it the first time around! So confused and annoyed.
Anyway. This . . . wow. I have no words. I read it on your blog, by the way, so I got to experience every single magical moment of their "milestone". I think I'm still blushing - I feel just like Akane must have felt after it was all over. If I smoked, I think I'd be needing a cigarette right about now, lol.
Brilliant job, as always. You captured their emotions, their insecurities, their excitement, and intensity so perfectly. This entire chapter was pure perfection. I just hope Ranma's fears turn out to be unfounded, because these two need to be together forever and ever and ever and nothing less will do!
So, looking forward to the next chapter (even if I'm kinda dreading it as well.) I don't want anything to come between my lovely OTP, but I feel like real life is coming to stir things up, and not in a good, fun way. . .
| Phoenixstar117 chapter 15 . 12/8/2013
This is the second time I've read this particular story, the first being a couple years ago. I very much enjoyed it and look forward to it's completion. I'm happy to see that you do keep your author page regularly updated for us. Now as to what I thought of the story.
Great job. I'm really impressed by the depth that the characters have. There is a lot of deep issues that you can see each Ranma and Akane need to work out, not only in their relationship but with themselves. I also absolutely loved the theme of your story being the realization of what truly matters most. While that isn't the only theme portrayed, it is truly spectacular to watch, especially in the last two parts of chapter 8 where they are starting to get an inkling that maybe there isn't something more to life than career and success. It nearly broke my heart when they had their fight of course, but absolutely needed as I hadn't seen an actual conflict of their problems yet. Still, I'm super anxious about what will happen when Akane finally finds out about the engagement and whether or not Ranma will be getting the chance to propose without it all blowing up. You have a fan here, and I'm looking forward to the rest.
| PurseMonger chapter 15 . 9/25/2013
This is a wonderful piece of fanfiction that puts a realistic spin on the Ranmaverse. You do a wonderful job handling the emotions of two people who are learning about themselves while also learning how to handle their first serious relationship.
You’ve handled the issue of sex and sexual exploration very well. I read the entire version on your website and you did a good job portraying sex while not turning it into a porn fic.
I’m really looking forward to your next installment but I have to say, from the way your story is paced, I do see some rough times ahead for R&A. Since you’ve introduced Shampoo and have already acknowledged Akane’s fears of growing apart, I’m sure you’re going to introduce characters that create temptation for both of them. As a huge R&A shipper, I really hope neither of them falls prey to loneliness and hormones.
| vodkaCanidae chapter 15 . 9/12/2013
Wow. Brilliantly written! Love the touch of realism here while keeping some of the character traits and flaws. Great job! Thank you for writing!
| MegaByte435 chapter 15 . 7/1/2013
Please please please continue writing your story is so good, I love it and I want to continue reading it. :(