Reviews for Discovery
Chocolatekat chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
I think this one is your best yet. Great story.
Very odd way to end it. Usually inner dialog is just that. Suddenly switching to narrating was disorienting to read.
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
How is this rated 'm'? there wasn't any violence, swearing, sex, barely any drarry. It seems unfinished to me, like there could be more.