|Reviews for Discovery|
| Chocolatekat chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
I think this one is your best yet. Great story.
Very odd way to end it. Usually inner dialog is just that. Suddenly switching to narrating was disorienting to read.
| DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
How is this rated 'm'? there wasn't any violence, swearing, sex, barely any drarry. It seems unfinished to me, like there could be more.