Reviews for Addicted
Guest chapter 16 . 1/2
Beautiful but the untold part was not neccisary
MA NOT ALLOWED chapter 6 . 2/11/2015
Hello Hatter Child:

Did you know the admins publicly announced the following concerning MA content?:

"Please note we would like to clarify the content policy we have in place since 2002. FanFiction DOT Net follows the Fiction Rating system ranging from Fiction K to Fiction M. Although Fiction Ratings goes up to Fiction MA, FanFiction DOT Net since 2002 has not allowed Fiction MA rated content which can contain adult/explicit content on the site. FanFiction DOT Net only accepts content in the Fiction K through Fiction M range. Fiction M can contain adult language, themes and suggestions. Detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature is considered Fiction MA and has not been allowed on the site since 2002."

- Post by Admins on June 4th 2012, after deleting 50k MA related content stories

Despite what your feelings/thoughts/ideas etc. are about concerning MA content onsite, it is seriously not allowed here as per their guidelines, rules, and the announcement they made above back in 2012, which still applies to the present. By you posting it, this story(ies), you are breaking their 'No MA Content' rule and are disregarding the admins announcement too. As my username implies, 'MA [CONTENT IS] NOT ALLOWED', be of sexual and/or violence in nature.

Please remember that you agreed to the rules when you created a account here and uploaded any material here. By clicking the statement, 'Yes, I have read and agreed to the content guidelines', you have confirmed to the admins and everyone else that you have read and agreed to their rules and guidelines, this includes the consequences that may follow as mentioned in their rules/ToS.

To make your material compliant, you can do one of the following:

o Move the MA content portion/section, chapter, or the whole story to another site that allows it. Remember to remove the MA content that is here.

o Tone it down to a M or lower rating. Remove any mentions of graphic details concerning body parts, strong physical interaction(s), lemons/smut etc. You can, in lamest terms, make it 'fade to black' and/or not be so graphic. You can also do the following above to keep the 'unedited' version.

o If most of your material has MA content in it and it will take too long to edit, it would be best to remove the later chapters/portions, keep only the first chapter/post and revise that one quickly. Your reviews will NOT disappear nor vanish when you delete and/or re-upload the non-rule breaking chapters. They will still be there. You can also mention that the material is located elsewhere at the end of the chapter as a short author's notes (not stand alone notes) and the link can be found on your profile. That way, those that want to read the edited version can wait and those that do not want to wait or want the edited version can still read that one.

o If you are unsure if this and/or your other material(s) has MA content in it, it is not bad to play it safe by removing/revising etc. the portion(s) and/or chapters you are concerned about. Although, if I am reviewing the material, it does mean that there is MA content in it. Know that by keeping it, your stories and possibly your account would be at risk. Sometimes the admins deletes accounts, be one rule breaking story on it or not.

Thank you for reading,


NOTE 1: I am not part of any groups on this site or anywhere else. If you heard or hear or read elsewhere that I am part of a group or otherwise, it is false. If I do not state it on my profile or substantial evidence is not provided or it was not stated by me personally, it is false until proven otherwise.

NOTE 2: My private messages are on, but it does not mean I will respond and/or reply at all. I will not repeat/argue/debate etc. if it about you creating/coming up with excuses of why your unedited/original MA material should stay etc.

NOTE 3: Others that see this review and know they have this kind of material and you decide to deliberately block me, I will instead report and email them your rule breaking and/or illegal material immediately and provide proof that blocking me was to avoid being reported, and therefore, showing malicious intent to continue the rule breaking actions (AKA 'reporting invasion'). Please know that it does not not block anyone from reporting stories, account or not.

NOTE 4: Please know that your story(ies) will still be added to my community and will only be removed when the material has been made compliant. Please PM me if that occurs with proof. I do always check to see if it is compliant. If it is not, and you are trying to make it so, I will help you to the best of my abilities.
bhailey639 chapter 2 . 7/9/2013
I thought that seiji had green hair
D chapter 18 . 2/27/2013
This story is amazing! God this story made me cry, laugh and scream. Very well done and I hope you continue to write beautiful stories! :D
Colyn chapter 16 . 10/24/2012
I'm speechless...This story made me cry so hard, you're an amazing writer! So emotional and beautifully written. Thank you for this perfect story...
NatAngel Dark Wings chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
WOW thsi was soo frilling!
KuroHiiragi-Chan chapter 16 . 5/9/2012
Q_Q Is it weird that I just bawled my eyes out when they announced Takeos death? _ The same thing happened with Naokis death aswell... honestly I'm too sensitive for my own good xD

Gotta say I'm in LOVE with this story! I've read "chap. 18" or deleted scenes or however you wanna call 'em and the end was so... so... cliffhangy? I don't know, but I'd have liked to read about the re-incounter of Sono and his family x3 Wait... would Sono even be in good shape to take a plane to Tokyo? I mean his knee's busted and stuff so wouldn't his parents kinda spazz out if they saw him like that? xD Oh well~ xD

*Ahem* Anyways, great story! I'm gonna go and check for any other stories you might of written~~ xXx
BeyondBirthday133 chapter 16 . 2/6/2012
Beautiful ending.
The Only Sane One chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
It's good, but there are a few mistakes.

"One of them had a neck around his throat, tightened horribly."

I believe "neck" was suposed to be 'necktie,' right? ()
BeyondBirthday133 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
First off: this is lenkagamine133, got a new account.

Anyways, i was wondering that was going on started reading and was like 'I've read this before, what the hell.' but man hat sucks. .